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Who Is Moving ?

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Purple2017, Aug 31, 2018.

  1. Purple2017

    Purple2017 Silver IL'ite

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    Earth is a garden
    as I get up from bed
    I just move:
    interact with living and non-living beings
    mind is moving
    body is following
    all my limbs at work
    till I embrace sleep
    at the end of the day
    the onus lies with me only
    not the 'time'....
    time is invisible
    the doer celebrates time
    with work only;
    life's accomplishment evaluated
    in terms of work only
    activity is important, not time
    hence I am moving, not time.
     
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  2. Imani

    Imani New IL'ite

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    Again I hope it is ok if I reply. Am I correct that love and time are 2 themes you often write about? I think this one might be too deep for me to understand. I appreciate some prose/ poetry but it was never my strong point in literature classes.
     
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