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Horror Story : I Am Waiting For You....

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by sumalynux, Feb 3, 2018.

  1. sumalynux

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    Hi all

    Going on a trip. Long weekend..
    (Wed July 4th is leave here). Will be back on monday.

    Will write after that. 3 to 4 episodes. Will complete story next week.
     
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    Hi @sumalynux

    Waiting for the next episode.please try and finish it soon .
     
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    EPISODE 25

    Deepika was shocked to see Geetha.

    "This is my wife Geetha. Geetha you know Aryan my roomate in usa, this is Deepika his wife" introduced Raghu

    "Hello Deepika nice to meet you.. Aryan helped us so much while we were in usa. We even stayed at his house 3 months before moving to India permanently" said Geetha giving coffee to everyone..


    "where is your parents asked Aryan" Looking around the house

    "Appa has gone to walking, he should be here any moment. Amma is taking bath" said Geetha

    " I have put leave. Once uncle comes we can ask him to check about the Bank manager " said Raghu

    Raghu saw Deepika stunned and had not taken coffee also.

    "Deepika take coffee what happened, is everything alright" asked Raghu

    "hmmm yeah yeah. Everything is fine" said Deepika while her phone started ringing..

    Deepika took the phone and went to balcony to attend the call..

    "Hello Deepika, this is Suchitra. We met the Purohit suggested by my friend."
    Let us know once you find about Sarika and her family. We will come there immediately with purohit. He was telling its better to do rituals there and do proper Samskara for deceased, So atma(soul) can rest in peace and wont bother" said Suchitra

    "I think i am in Sarika's house. Looks like we have been staying in her house from yesterday.
    I think i just met her Atthai(Aunt)" said Deepika hesitantly.

    "Whatttt. What are you saying. You guys went to Aryan's friend Raghu's house right" asked worried Suchitra

    "Yes i think Geetha, Raghu's wife is Sarika's atthai. I remember her face from Locket chain i found in our Guest room" said Deepika

    "God its not safe at her place. I have Raghu's address. We will start immediately with the Purohit". You people immediately move to some Hotel and call me from there" said Suchitra.

    "Sure Aunty will do that" said Deepika

    Geetha's mom had finished bath and came to balcony to dry towel.

    "You.. Why are you here at our house. You took away our son and grand daughter. What else you want now" cried Savithramma (Geetha's mom)

    Everyone ran near balcony hearing savithramma screaming...

    "Aunty do you know her, this is my friend Aryan's wife" said confused Raghu

    "Oh to marry him only you rejected my son.. If you dint want to marry him, why did you show fake love to my son and Sarika" cried Savithramma

    Aryan and Geetha stood silent and confused..


     
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    Is this Geetha or Geetha’s mom?
     
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    Thanks to point it.. No its Geetha's mom..

    Geetha and Aryan is stunned with the happenings.
     
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    EPISODE 26



    "No aunty, you have got me wrong. I showed love to Sarika, because i liked her and wanted to give company to her as she dint have mother.. But Hemanth sir is my lecturer. I respect him" said Deepika with water in her eyes.

    "Stop your drama, i heard you talking to Sarika. Sarika asked if you liked to be her mom.. You said Yes." said Savithramma angrily

    "Deepika, what is aunty saying. Did you promise Sarika, that you would marry Hemanth and ber her mom" asked Aryan

    "God i never loved Hemanth sir. Sarika said "she wished i was her mom". To make her happy i said i would love to be your mom" I grew closer to sarika and did like her a lot. But this has nothing to do with loving or marrying Hemanth sir.. Trust me" pleaded Deepika

    "I trust you, but without you giving some kind of hopes, why would it grow this big. Why would the girl want to haunt us" asked confused Aryan

    Savithramma kept accusing Deepika. Deepika just stood crying. Aryan was totally lost and was not sure, to defend Deepika or to believe Savithramma. Raghu was trying to calm down Savithramma.. Geetha stood stunned without a word..

    "Geetha, talk something. Ask your mom to control. Its my friend Aryan and his wife.. Sarika has become ghost and haunting them. We need to help them. Geetha.. Geetha... said Aryan shaking Geetha.

    Suddenly Geetha started screaming.. Its Sarika not Geetha....

    Everyone turned towards Geetha. Geetha's eyes was red and protruding. She looked very scary..

    "Geetha, what are you saying. What do you mean you are Sarika" said Raghu holding Geetha's hand.

    Next moment Raghu was thrown in air. He fell on door knob, and hurt his head.

    Deepika was trashed and dragged through out the house. Deepika started screaming "help.. help"...

    Aryan tried to hold Geetha's hand to stop her. Sarika in Geetha's body, lifted the couch and put it on Aryan. Aryan was struck under heavy couch, unable to move...

    Savithramma stood confused and scared without a reaction.

    "You are lying, you did love my dad. You promised you will be my mom and love me always. Where were you when i got high fever. My dad came to you. But you insulted him and married someone else.. He died because of you" screamed Sarika in Geetha's body.

    "Sarika. Please trust me. I never loved or agreed to marry your dad. I liked you and was trying to be nice to you. And said yes to you. As i dint want to disappoint you" pleaded Deepika folding her hands.

    No.... You shouldnt have come to our life. I had lost my mom. I lost my dad and i also died because of you.. You destroyed my entire family said Sarika angrily and threw Sarika

    Geetha's dad who came from walking was stunned seeing all this. Raghu was hurt and falling near door. Aryan was struck under couch. Deepika was hurt and Geetha(Sarika in her body) was holding Deepika's hair and Savithramma stood confused.
     

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