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Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by blackbeauty84, Apr 16, 2018.

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  1. Apr 18, 2018 #21
    minesotasundari

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    I feel Aditya love is not true after so many years. No one can even think of hurting the most special person in our life. For some reason if Love cannot end in marriage will Love turn to revenge ,i cannot accept:(...After seeing Sadhana his love had changed to lust.

    If he really wants to payback he shouldnt have been closer with her .Both males (aditya and sadhana father) have ruined her life.

    Again Sadhana father was a good teacher and motivator but not a good father.BB loved your narration.
     
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    Sadhna should take this revenge in a positive way and NOT let these males "ruin' her life. well educated...she should equally happily move on.
    :)

    Finding a loving partner is also a part of fate hence not commenting there.
     
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    :)
     
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    blackbeauty84

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    Thanks Saya83
     
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    Thank you Chitra
     
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    Might be to get even..
     
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    blackbeauty84

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    Part 2 seems to be an idea :)
     
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    blackbeauty84

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    Thanks Muggs..Yes wrote this for TOI Contest. Mine didn't get selected
     
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    Mm thats true. But it happens peddadas
     
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    Thats true nandini. Most of the time its females who suffer for males decision.
     
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