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Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by Akanksha1982, Feb 16, 2017.

  1. peddadas

    peddadas Platinum IL'ite

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    Like we say in general ..
    .timing is not good for me..so cudnt reply but
    You didn't answer about Given..trying to recollect..
     
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    Hiten is from Valentine's Day.
     
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    Yeah was guessing it..cool..You pull the characters from your other stories and blend them here so smoothly..you know how to glue your audience ..:)

    --PS
     
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    Hi Ma'am, for now I could complete one of ur novel....Mirror never lies...Fantastic narration and superb valuable message. I know i am too late to comment but the story flow was awesome..instead beating around the bush I can the story was power packed. Just one thing I would lke to share which was really mind blowing wer kavitha and Raghu didn't really want to know the reason or bother about the reason which changed their life....True why do we have to dig in too much when everything turned out to be happy and pleasant isn't....You have written the story really well ma'am. Thanks for such a sweet and meaningful novel. :clap2::clap2::clap2::number_one: Will comment once I complete the other novels too. Waiting for a new one as well.

     
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    Great writing as usual. Very cinematic, I could almost picture a duet in Swiss, sad song (roja type) for Poonam when she was imprisoned, climax song showing conflicting emotions of sisters :)
    I am sure there will be a movie made soon. Hiten is my all time favorite hero in all your stories, thank you for bringing him here.
    Keep writing...
     
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    Thanks Adarv for your wonderful comments and am glad you liked the story.
    Thank you for your continued suppoert.
     
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    Yes songs would be great. Roza is my favorite movie too. Wow it would be fun if someone makes the movie.
    Thanks Mriduna for your lovely comments.
     

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