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  1. Apr 3, 2017 #141
    blackbeauty84

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    Good end..Climax episode connected all the dots together.
     
    blackbeauty84, Apr 3, 2017
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  2. Apr 3, 2017 #142
    Akanksha1982

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    Thank you. Yes. I end up liking my last story. This one was difficult to portray double role in a story format.
     
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    :fearscream::fearscream::fearscream::coldsweat: I missed 2??? :BangHead:
     
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  4. Apr 3, 2017 #144
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  5. Apr 4, 2017 #145
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    @Akanksha1982 , started reading yesterday, couldnt find time to finish though I badly wanted to. Just finished reading it now. Kept me on the edge till I finished. :thumbsup:
     
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  6. Apr 5, 2017 #146
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    very gripping story Akanksha. Liked the way all the dots were connected in the last episode. Waiting for another story from you.
     
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    Hi Aks,

    Sorry for the late reply....

    I was confused in one of the episodes and could not continue reading it further as I have to read the whole story once.

    I read all the episodes and the plot is clear now.

    All I could say/see is, father's love, sister's love, husband, an orphan, friend, fraud etc., all the characters are captured so clearly that I could picturize it.

    BTW, Is Hiten from Valentine's day ??:banana::banana: I love his character. You made him a Mr. Perfect (There is a telugu movie by that name)..

    Last but not the least your explanation about dressing , locations, interiors will make me spend my money ...lol...

    Thanks a lot for your story.

    Good Luck Aks,
    PS
     
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  8. Apr 6, 2017 #148
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    Thanks @SunPa for liking the story. Yes a thriller requires a roller coaster narration. I enjoyed writing it as well. I always end up liking my latesr story. I fall in love with the characters and the story.
     
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    Thank you for your wonderful feedback it gives a lot of motivation.
     
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    Thanks PS
    You have been my encoragement through all my stories. I was disappointed that i may not have met your expectations with this one. But i like to experiment with different concepts exploring differrent lifestyles. An orphan girl suddenly finding her identical twin sister and their lives interchange because of corcumstances was the concept that resulted in the story. Glad that you could eventually read it and provude feedback. More than the story i love the feebacks i receive. That motivates me.
     
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