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Will You Cross The Sky For Me

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by Rajiv, Jun 7, 2016.

  1. thanuriya

    thanuriya Silver IL'ite

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    varun : sabbbbbbhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa....ipove kanna kattuthey....mudiyalaai...mudinjirchunu ninaichen inu mudiyalaya....ethanay.

    varun nilamay intha vadivelu dialogue ku pakkavva porunthuthu....

    was too good rajiv...enjoyed reading this
     
  2. Rajiv

    Rajiv Gold IL'ite

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    Rajiv Gold IL'ite

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    Part 10

    I was so scared that I started sweating immediately. I couldn’t speak anything. I was tongue tied. But I didn’t show my nervousness to her. I just said “I don’t care who ever it is. I will be strong in my love and will always be there for you. I will walk to him bravely before he comes here”

    “No. wait”

    “Why? What if your dad comes and asks who I am?”

    “He is not my dad. I was just joking. I thought you will be scared”

    “See Aradana. I Love you and I will always be there for you. That’s all”
    She looked at me silently and then said “Cho..chweet”.

    I blushed and said “I was saying seriously”

    She was silent for a moment and said “Hey will you do anything for me?”

    “Why are you asking like this? What should I do now? Tell me”

    “Look at those guys in that table. They are staring at me for a long time. Go and ask scold them”

    I got up suddenly and stood straight. I folded my sleeve up. It was like as if some power came to me. I asked who are they and turned to see them. As soon as I saw them my power went like EB power cut. They were looking very huge. I have seen people like them only in wrestling. They were eating a large piece of non-veg and that piece seemed too small compared to their hands.

    “Why are you waiting? Go and give them nicely”

    “Give them what?? If they push me it seems I will go and fall a km back.. What to give”, I thought to myself and was thinking of a way to convince her.

    “See, what have elders told us?”, I asked.

    “What did they say?”

    “We should use fighting as last weapon”

    “Ok. So?”

    “I will go and talk to them. If they accept their mistake I will ask them to apologize.”

    “Hmm..ok”

    I walked to their table slowly. I went near them and said “Hi…undertaker”

    Both of then looked up and one of them asked “What?”

    “What you did is wrong. You look so terror. That’s ok. But since a girl is beautiful you can’t wink at others girlfriend. It’s too bad you know. Come on..ask sorry to my girl”

    “She only winked at me”

    “ha..ha..ha..ha..good joke. Even if you lie it should be proper”

    “Kya..kya bolhta??”

    “Then what? Look at her. She is so beautiful. Look at you people. You are looking like wild pigs. Did she wink at you people..ha..ha..ha”. I said this in a flow and only after that I realized that I have triggered anger in them.

    Both of them got up at the same time, folded their arms and gave me a punch. Next second I was in her table and I didn’t know what happened. My both cheeks felt a burning sensation. Blood oozed out of my lips.
    Bells were ringing in my mind. I look at her with swollen face.

    “Oh my God”, she exclaimed.

    She opened her hand bag. There were lots of tables, plasters and bandages. She took a bandage and put it over my bleeding lips. I couldn’t tolerate my pain.

    “Don’t worry. You will be fine in a day or two”

    They came near me and said “Be careful when you talk. That is why plaster for you”. I didn’t reply anything.

    “Take care”, one of them said and they went.

    “Hey go away. You have hit him and now saying take care”, she yelled.

    One guy alone turned back and asked “Kya?”

    “Leave them na”, I said.

    “Why? Are you afraid that they will come back?”

    “No. I don’t think they did anything wrongly”

    “Oh! From when did this happen? Since the time they gave you punch?”

    “No. I had a doubt already, but still spoke with them”

    “What are you trying to say?”

    “Say me truly. You only winked at them na?”

    “Why? You didn’t get enough from them?”, saying this she got up folding her arms.

    “Noooo..please leave me. I didn’t say anything”.

    Seeing this she started laughing again.

    “I couldn’t bare the pain”

    She looked at me then took a tablet from her hand bag and asked me to eat it.

    “What is this? You have a pharmacy in your bag?”

    She suddenly became sad. She lowered her head. I couldn’t understand anything. She told me silently “ I have a rare heart disease. I am sorry. I should have told you earlier”.

    “Don..Dont play”

    “What is there to play in it?”

    “Is it a very dangerous disease?”

    “Yeah. Heart won’t be in a proper shape. There will be swelling in one side. Blood circulation will be improper”.

    “Is it possible to cure with some surgery?”

    “No Varun. It is not possible. I am in a critical stage. It is a miracle that I have survived this long. I don’t know for how many days I will be alive”

    “What is this? Don’t talk like this. Don’t lose hope. I won’t allow something to happen to you. I am there na?”, I was stammering.

    She was watching my expressions and suddenly said “Cho..chweet”.

    “What sweet? I am talking here seriously and you are saying sweet”

    “Ha ha ha…”

    “Why are you laughing?”

    “Will you believe whatever I say? I was just kidding”

    I didn’t say anything. I was just looking at her.

    “What are you looking at?”

    “Nothing. You didn’t answer me yet”

    “Answer for what?”

    “Why are you having a mini pharmacy in your bag?”

    “Oh.. no special reason and all..we may get fever or cold suddenly. Or else someone might punch us and make puncture”, she was laughing in between.

    I was just saying ok ok was touching my bandage.

    “Hey it’s time for me. I am leaving” she said.

    “Wait”

    “What?”

    “Tomorrow shall we meet here? Same time?”

    “Tomorrow no chance. I won’t be coming”

    “Why?”

    “Because I have some other appointment”

    “What appointment?”

    She was about to say something and stopped suddenly. “ You have bike right?” she asked me

    “Yeah I have”

    “Shall we do like this then?”

    “Do what?”

    “Shall we go out tomorrow? We will roam around the city”

    I was thinking on it. I had an important meeting next day, but who cares. “Are you sure?” I asked.

    “Yes. Tomorrow you and me separately”

    “What?? Separately??”

    “No. I mean alone”

    “OK. Then come to tambaram tomorrow morning at 10 AM”

    “OK. Sure”

    “Then one more thing”

    “Yeah tell me”

    “Economy of your bike?”

    “Around 40 to 50 km per liter”

    “No. Not that economy. For how much can we sell it?”

    “Wh..what?? sell?? Why?”

    “I don’t have idea about bikes. So asked to know about it”

    “oh ok ok. You can ask the bike company na. It will go for around 50k”

    “OK then. Fine see you tomorrow”, I could see that her face was bright as soon as she heard 50k.

    I left to my room. My roommates started enquiring about the bandage.

    “There is one big door near the entrance na?”

    “Yes”, said bala.

    “Two big guys machi. Suddenly they opened the door without seeing me. It hit me right in the face. They both were saying sorry for a long time. I was angry and thought of hitting them. But what to do. What are we going to get by hitting them. I just left them. But Aradana was worrying after seeing this”

    They didn’t say anything. They were seeing each other and smiling a little but they never said anything.

    “Hey machi really she didn’t beat me. I promise”, I said

    “Confirmed machi. He has promised, it means that has only happened”, bala said to Niranjan.

    “Why da? Wont she worry about me? Why won’t she?. One more thing da”

    “What?”, asked Niranjan.

    “Tomorrow both of us are going out. We are going to roam around. Will say you my experience tomorrow when I am back”.

    --------To be continued-----
     
  4. aarthi28

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    Hey Rajiv
    Good going and good imagination. You narration makes me feel as If I am watching a Movie.
    Lets see, whether these are real or Varun's friends making fun of him with Aradana.
     
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    nice one rajiv.

    puzzling aradhana
    real challenge to varun
     
  6. Rajiv

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    thank you aarthi
     
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    Venampa.aalai vidunga
     
  8. Rajiv

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    thanks much...
     
  9. Rajiv

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    thapichiteenga :p :p
     
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    I started reading this, omg what kind of confusion and what kind of girl is that? Can't wait to see what 's going to happen next! Looks like she is some CID working on some case by sitting in that hotel and observing someone.
     

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