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Love! Love! Love! - Episode 1

Discussion in 'Varalotti Rengasamy's Short & Serial Stories' started by varalotti, Aug 11, 2010.

  1. varalotti

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    Love! Love! Love!

    A Serial In Blog Format By Varalotti Rengasamy


     
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    Dear sridhar ,
    Superb ! The love that bonds the family members is extraordinary - that anybody would long to have such loving relations ! Well done , sridhar !
    Will visit again with a detailed fb , my DH !
    Love & regards,
    Indhu .
     
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    wow.. very nice. eagerly awaiting the rest
     
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    Dearest Indhu,
    thanks a lot for being the first to comment. And am eagerly waiting for your detailed fb.
    The fact that you showed enormous patience in reading through the entire script and the fact that you gave some valuable suggestions that changed the course of the story needs to be recorded here.
    Thanks once again.
    love,
    sridhar
     
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    Thanks a lot, Tuffyshri. I need to start working right from today to post the next episode on 18th August.

    love,
    sridhar
     
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    Dear Sridhar,

    What makes your story stand out is not only the setting, it is also the pace at which it runs. And, that's quite fast. You never allow the reader's mind to get distracted at all. So, naturally, with full attention, the reader is able to concentrate and enjoy the story.

    Keep it going.

    Nice Day
    Shail
     
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    Dear Sridhar,
    That was a beautiful beginning on your favourite topic-"Love". Once again a family subject, which I am sure will churn out varied emotions and you being great at it, you will be able to make even the emotion-less people emote with your writing style.

    How beautifully you have conveyed through the bindi example, the gaudiness of a Zari silk saree!
    The two brothers criminal, scheming brain and the implementation of their wicked plot at a most inopportune moment really creates a natural repugnance towards them.
    And.... Kilpauk area seems to be your favourite place in this story too!
    A wonderful beginning. Waiting to see how the story unfolds.
    Love
    Malathi
     
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    Dear Sridhar,
    That was a beautiful beginning on your favourite topic-"Love". Once again a family subject, which I am sure will churn out varied emotions and you being great at it, you will be able to make even the emotion-less people emote with your writing style.

    How beautifully you have conveyed through the bindi example, the gaudiness of a Zari silk saree!
    The two brothers criminal, scheming brain and the implementation of their wicked plot at a most inopportune moment really creates a natural repugnance towards them.
    And.... Kilpauk area seems to be your favourite place in this story too!
    A wonderful beginning. Waiting to see how the story unfolds.
    Love
    Malathi
     
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    Dear Boost,

    So the queen has come here to reply after a long loong time....adhuvum first fb ore kalakals dhan.


    Good one Sri...jet speed dhan. all the character are very lively full of warmth. An ideal family setting.

    Poor Renga and Parimala...so much of trust on BILs and with destiny always smiling sarcastically....abbadda romba dhan suspense...

    I just hope Renga is fine though I have my doubts .......

    Good one Sri...
     
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    Dear Uncle,

    Wow ! you have got the first fb from a special person :)

    Lovely!!

    I enjoyed reading the story very much.

    //Zari in a saree should be like a bindi in your forehead. Your bindi can be small, large, narrow or broad. But if you smear bindi all over your forehead you’d look frightening. //

    what an ingenious comparison uncle.

    waiting for next wednesday uncle. :)
     

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