Take it or leave it

Salaswathi · Sep 1, 2015

Daisy, amazing story. hard to take a break in the middle. I was sad to see vandita lose in her goal. After all that careful work, she tried to grab it too soon. Sad. After all, she is the only young character that had no career; her only achievement would have been a successful marriage.... to someone she had loved a long time. A tragic story. Well done.

As someone who do not really like girls sacrificing their everything(youth, job prospects, wealth, career prospects, self-respect) to prop up some male ego, I was also sad to see Neelima get back together with Ravi. In my opinion, that was another tragic end. Both Neelima and Vandita lost. A double tragedy.

I enjoyed your writing.
I hope you will write again soon.

daisy2015 · Sep 1, 2015

Dear salaswathi, i am happy to know that you have enjoyed the story. As for Neelima, she is still doing her job. yes she got back with Ravi because she loved him with all her heart and always wanted to gain back his love and trust for her and her kid. so when he was repenting for his behavior genuinely and had tried to get her back in his life by changing his job and house to where she is living and was willing to wait for her all his life then she did choose to go with him and give their marriage another chance.

daisy2015 · Sep 1, 2015

see you soon with another story.

Arunarc · Sep 1, 2015

Hi Daisy

Lovely story with a lovely ending. That was really awesome of Ravi and Tarun to come to sweden and settle down with Neelima.

daisy2015 · Sep 2, 2015

Thank you Arunarc. Happy to see your message.

shashiv · Sep 2, 2015

Super story....
Enjoyed reading
Keep writing more

mcutiepie · Sep 2, 2015

Wonderful composition.. It was tough waiting for next part...

Bitter truth of life that many people claim to love their partner like nething else... but when the real test comes... they failed to trust or even dont try to find the truth...