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Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by IamLucky, Apr 9, 2015.

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  1. Jun 17, 2015 #551
    IamLucky

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    :thankyou2: Thanks friends. This last bit made me remember my wedding night..Oh poor me..:biglaugh
     
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  2. Jun 17, 2015 #552
    CuteCherry

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    Wonderful story IamLucky. Enjoyed each and every episode to the core. Congratulations on completion of first story in a grand success :).Hope we will get such beautiful and nice stories more and more...Wish you all the best dear.
     
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  3. Jun 17, 2015 #553
    Haya

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    i felt like i finished watching an awesome movie
    everything was so well described that one could feel its happening in front of your eyes
    you are an amazing story teller @IamLucky
    Stay blessed and may there are lots of success in your path as a writer.
    Enjoyed every bit of it.. and gonna miss all the characters for sure.
     
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    ammusatheesh

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    Wow that's a wonderful love story dear :) Expecting a lot of stories from u in future :thankyou2:
     
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  5. Jun 17, 2015 #555
    meerasrini

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    Wow Dear :) Beautiful Story it is. Surely will miss Krish and Riya :(( We never felt its your 1st story. Eagerly waiting for next story from you :) Till the time miss you :)
     
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  6. Jun 18, 2015 #556
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    @IamLucky..


    that was a wonderful story... neatly narrated... felt like watching a movie... and u updated very regularly.... and dont fear u never crossed limits in romance... that nicely described.... expecting another one from you soooon... take care.. hugsmiley



    regards,
    Dheiva
     
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  7. Jun 18, 2015 #557
    Soch

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    :wowIamLucky, very Nice,Loved it.

    I just read the ending now. I did not expect you posting something yesterday, my bad luck. I was busy post lunch, there were continuous meeting. I went the last page directly then realized story came to an end, went searching for last episode.

    It became an habit to check the updates in morning, during boring meetings what will I do now:bowdown. Start something Soon dear.

    All the very best for your future stories. You are truly a good writer:hatsoff.
     
    Soch, Jun 18, 2015
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  8. Jun 18, 2015 #558
    Catgol

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    That was awesome iam lucky .. It was like a real fairy tale wedding ..loved the story to every bit . All the best to you .. Try different genres . Looking forward for your next story
     
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    adisum

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    Heyyyy that last part was cute and romantic. A prince and his princess totally lost in each other's love in a house boat.. wow I wish my wedding night to be like this but we have no beaches and such clean lakes here in my or his city... Cant imagine first night in a boat on filthy water , so I will think of something else ... ;) laugh1smiley

    thank you @IamLucky, and yes right ,too much detail would have make the story lost its moral and tenderness. Loved the way you described it .. :kiss
     
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  10. Jun 18, 2015 #560
    IamLucky

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    Dear friends, When i read the feed backs today morning i was really moved.
    You people are my first impressions to write a story.
    Thanks for being with me.:hatsoff.
    I am sure i will come up with another wonderful plot with much more improvements.
    Expecting the same love and feedback in future also.
    Will miss you gals.:kiss
     
    IamLucky, Jun 18, 2015
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