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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by MyselfandI, May 26, 2015.

  1. MyselfandI

    MyselfandI Silver IL'ite

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    Starving and ravenous I am,
    In need of something to fill my tummy,

    Dehydrated and feeling thirsty I am,
    Need some drink to quench my thirst,

    Depressed and bored to death I am,
    Need some spice to spruce up life,

    Tired and weak I am,
    Need a lifeline,

    Need you!!!
     
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  2. MyselfandI

    MyselfandI Silver IL'ite

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    Thanks for your like, typical lady
     
  3. MyselfandI

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    thanks for your "like",rohanj
     
  4. MyselfandI

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    thank you very much for your like, adinil
     
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    thanks for your like ,mimmyme
     
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    Lovely poem, beautifully written.
     
  7. MyselfandI

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    thanks for your like kaniths
     
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    thanks for your like and appreciation @Poetlatha
     
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    @MyselfandI,

    Good one.
     
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    Nice twist, @saisevika, very beautiful response to the poem, a nice solution!
    @MyselfandI whether it's a personal or impersonal poem, here are my two cents to it, sometimes in life we need nobody, but to discover ourself and become a "new me" . We are all born alone, we should learn to live alone, and also die alone is my concept. Though sometimes bound by family and people around,there are times when we are alone, many truths are revealed at such moments. Sorry, I'm in a philosophical mood today. Just felt like sharing my view.
     

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