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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by citygirl, May 13, 2015.

  1. citygirl

    citygirl New IL'ite

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    Heart numb and eyes dry
    the pain I suffer is my own
    no one to share no one who cares
    downhearted and dejected
    I stand alone

    Painful memories that haunt
    in the light and the dark
    there is no escape
    when the pain is from within
    I cry alone

    When life is hell, death is heaven
    I seek the sweet escape
    end so close but never there
    for a broken soul like me
    I live alone
     
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  2. Lathasv

    Lathasv IL Hall of Fame

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    Really nice one:)
    I guess this is your first poem... Keep continue to write...
     
  3. Poetlatha

    Poetlatha Platinum IL'ite

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    Very nicely expressed...my two cents to deal with sorrow and pain, hobbies do heal, nature does nurture us, solitude is bliss, if we immerse in these, harmony hops within us. Your poem is precise and to the point, pen more, best wishes.
     
  4. citygirl

    citygirl New IL'ite

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    Thanks Lathasv and Poetlatha for your kind words. This is my first attempt at writing. I am going through a difficult time. I thought I will try writing to see if it will help.
     
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  5. Lathasv

    Lathasv IL Hall of Fame

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    @citygirl
    We put our pain or angry on paper it will clear from heart.. Take care of yourself.
    you will be fine:)
     
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    nice one describing the struggle with beautiful wordings, thanks for sharing
     
  7. Scorpio707

    Scorpio707 Platinum IL'ite

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    A nice one CG...and yes you must vent out your feelings in the best way known to you...best wishes....
     

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