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  1. Catgol

    Catgol Platinum IL'ite

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    Raj took his car and it was exactly 5 hours drive to kolli hills ..shekar was already at the forest check post waiting for him..

    shekar I did not say anything to nisha . I got really scared when you said you found an unknown body .. Don't panic raj first of all take a look at the car ..

    raj saw the car TN 38 9292 it was indeed ravi 's A class Mercedes .. We are not sure of the body though the face is completely in a decomposed state . Where is the spot asked raj .. In the foot hills of pavalamalai .. Raj described all the incident that took place in the recent times And how the evil spirit was haunting him and nisha .. They traveled 29 kms to reach pavalamalai from kolli hills ..

    pavalamali is a strange place the tribal people believe that lord Shiva and goddess Parvati reside there ..

    there was a commotion of people whispering among themselves and two constables where trying to keep them away from the body ..raj went closer and he saw the body which was in a complete decomposed state .. Raj went closer and he was not able to identify the body ..

    A tribal woman among the crowd came crying and declared it was indeed her son's body .his name is muthu ..and to the astonishment the villagers suddenly saw the hill which had split into two and the new emergent hill looked like a lingam exactly .. How do you know this is your son 's body asked shekAr . He has been missing for a week now iam unwell I don't even know the name of the disease I have got , it was muthu who went to pavalamalai as the people in the village believe that there are magical herbs found in the mountain that can cure all sorts of diseases ..

    we need to send the body for the post mortem .. You come to the police station And give the report said shekar to the grieving mother . Raj was happy that it wasnt ravi 's body ..


    do you think the boy has been murdered asked raj .

    you might never know , recently many people have been trying to climb the hill as they believe the herbs can cure cancer .. To become rich and to sell the Herb in the market there are lots of competition going on. But I have never seen the mountains split into two this is indeed a strange incident . I have called seismographic experts to confirm the reason why the mountain had split into two .. Mean while the villagers said amongst themselves that it was the anger of the lord shiva . It must be the dispute among the lord shiva and Parvati that had caused the mountain to split said a senior villager And the news some how leaked in the media And hundreds of reporters stormed in the village to have a glimpse of the mountain And the news of magical herbs that could completely cure cancer was spread like a fire


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    ravi some how climbed the mountain And reached the top .. There was a dark man dancing with his Axe And near to him was the nandhi ready to pounce ravi
     
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  2. simply_doubtful

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    wow superb narration Catgol
     
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    super super super :)
     
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    Superb chanceyae illa...
     
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    Superb episode my dear...
     
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    Catgol,

    You have a magic in your writing...that keeps one glued to keep reading...

    I happened to hit this thread...and i kept reading through pages....without any break..

    Superb story....

    Cant wait anymore to read the next part of it.

    Hope you wont make us wait longer
     
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    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Hmmmm....at last I could come to the story and complete it or was now up to date.
    As usual Catgol your narration was fantastic, enjoyed reading it.
    I know you are an excellent writer but in this story I could find many grammatical mistakes and also I think by mistake you have written Ravi in place of Raj, otherwise the story is just :2thumbsup:
     
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  8. Catgol

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    " now from the sixth hour there was darkness all over the land untill the ninth hour.and about the ninth hour Jesus cried with a loud voice ' Eli , Eli, Lema sabachthani , that is ' my God , My God why hast thou forsaken me

    " and behind thr curtain of the temple was torn in two , from top to bottom, And the earth shook And the rocks were split . ( a famous chapter from the holy bible )

    There were reports of mountains splitting all over the world . One happened in the charming historical museum in Gaeta( Italy ) . A chapel was built in of these fissures of the mountain And is a famous tourist spot till date

    mountains splitting always marked as a positive sign to the human kind . In case of pavalamalai thousands of people gathered to have the look at the mountain .. Media reporters from all the prime news channel were gathered in pavalamalai ..

    the tribal people gathered in the foot hills and began offering their prayers to the mighty mountain . Shekar called the seismograph expert to figure out the reason why the mountain had split into two ..

    A team of 4 seismograph expert were gathered and they held a seismograph instrument in their hand . A simple seismometer that is sensitive to up And down motions of the earth can be understood by visualising a weight hanging on the springs. The spring And the weight are suspended from a crane that moves along with the earth 's surface . As the earth moves , the relative motion between the weight And earth provides a measure of the vertical ground motion. If a recording system is installed the relative motion between the weight And earth can be recorded to produce a history of ground motion called a seismogram. Any movement of the ground moves the frame but in case of pavalamalai there was no such movement recorded in the seismogram..

    The experts shook their head in disbelief .. Gupta the senior seismogram expert shocked the media that this was one of the rarest occurrence against the nature ..

    This caused a stir among the media people and soon pavalamalai was the talk of the town .. A pharmacuetical company had sent its team members to collect the so called magical herb that could cure cancer .. Pavalamalai became a goldmine for all the prospective traders ..

    Shekar had asked raj to stay at his house which was located near the forest check point .
    What is happening shekar everything Seems to be mystical in this village said raj who was confused about the string of bizarre incidents that was taking place in the village ..

    I don't know but this tribal village became famous to the outside world now ..!as shekar was talking to raj , a falcon sat on the raj 's shoulders . Raj got frightened for a minute and tried to shoo away the bird but shekar stopped him . No raj , don't do it . It's a messenger of the swamiji living in the village . What are you talking about asked raj who was little uncomfortable with the bird still on the shoulder . Yes raj there is a famous swamiji in the village and the falcon acts as a messenger . If swamiji wishes to speak with a person the falcon sits on the person 's shoulders . Unless the swamiji wishes to see the person , the person by no means can see the swamiji .

    As Shekar closed his mouth . The falcon began to fly . Let's follow the bird said shekar and both of them started running in the direction the bird was flying .. They carried the torch in their hands as there was no electricity in the village . They ran for almost ten Kms when the bird flew inside a dark cave ..

    shekar and went inside the cave with great difficulty and there was a holy man sitting on the tiger 's hide and he appeared to be meditating with his eyes closed ..

    without opening his eyes the man continued to speak

    who is raj here asked the swamiji ,

    its me sir , iam raj .

    Raj you are the savior to the mankind ..

    raj stood there looking confused .

    The holy man continued .. You are here in pavalamalai for a reason And the reason is to save the human race ..

    But iam here in the look out for my uncle interrupted raj . Shekar signaled him not to speak . Raj you are here on a purpose do not search ravi for his fate is to die for his daughter ..

    You are the famous cancer specialist right asked swamiji .. Yes swami , replied raj . The mountain pavalamalai is a rarest treasure for the human being . The magical herbs called brahmapadam is located throughout the pavalamalai the herb will serve as the anti cancer agent .. Lots of pharma companies are trying to steal the herb to sell it at a good price in the market . Being a doctor you have to look for the herb and make medicine from it . Once the medicine reaches the market , the poor and needy people who are in dire need of money to cure their cancer diseases will be benefitted . This way Nancy 's spirit will also remain in peace

    how do you know Nancy asked raj looking suprised . Raj , iam a humble servant of the almighty and iam omnipotent , omnipresent and omniscient .raj and shekar were speechless .

    How will I find the herb asked raj . You need not find it the herb will find you .. Raj again looked confused . Swami opened his eyes . Here hold this said swamiji And gave him what seemed to be a root of the plant . Tommorrow is full moon day an auspicious day for lord shiva . Chant the name of the lord for 108 times And start climbing the mountain after 8 o clock in the night ... Keep the root in the centre Palm of your hand And the plant will come looking for you


    to be continued ......
     
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    wow...interesting.. Feels like I am watching a movie.. scary dialogues " the plant will come looking for you" OMG...i got goosebumps :hide:
     
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