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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by rgsrinivasan, Feb 12, 2014.

  1. rgsrinivasan

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    On a lovely romantic day of spring
    Came a swarm of them fast and humming.
    The collective sound was mesmerizing
    And the flowers bent slightly brimming,

    With joy that transformed so quickly to
    A fragrance that hypnotized the bees.
    The thought of honey intoxicated too
    And each of them found theirs with ease.

    Except one which for some reason
    Did not choose any though there were
    Many flowers left hoping that season,
    They would be spreading everywhere.

    Finally, the lonely bee chose
    A flower that was no special.
    Not a great fragrance or many hues
    Of colour was there in it as well.

    But something happened after the
    Bee chose that flower and that was
    So magical and its honey was the
    Best of all; Other bees were at a loss.

    It never forgot that little bee
    That made its life so lovely.
    As it wilted, it still had the
    Smile that lasted eternally.
     
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  2. Sonali222

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    Hiii rgs good to see ur post thank u
     
  3. jasmine25

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    Fantastic RGS, I wish there was a love button instead of like button..:clap
     
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    Thanks Sonali222, for your appreciation and first feedback. -rgs
     
  5. rgsrinivasan

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    Thanks Jasmine25, for your appreciation. -rgs
     
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    Thanks for your appreciation JyothiVarma. -rgs
     
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    Simply superb. Very nice..!!
     
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    Thanks Imanvel, for your appreciation. Very happy to receive a first from you. -rgs
     

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