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WHERE IS MY MR. RIGHT. - Story of Ramya, her teenage and married life...

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by sumalynux, Aug 30, 2013.

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  1. bubblygal

    bubblygal Platinum IL'ite

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    I will pray for your good health!
     
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    springsnb Gold IL'ite

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    Suma,
    We pray for you. Hope everything will be alright...... get well soon dear
    Take your time dear, its just a story.

    sri
     
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    Take really good care of your health dear! The treatments that you mentioned seemed all important.. chuck the story.. we will anyways read.. even if you write after decades.. But priorities are important! :) Take good care of your health.. I hope all goes well for you! :)
     
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    Dear suma,

    Take good care of ur health.... Dont worry about anything else...

    My prayers will be there for u :)
     
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    Suma, take care and have a speedy recovery...do not worry about the story, we will hang in here as long as it takes for you to post :thumbsup
     
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    Hello Suma,

    Hope the surgery goes well. Take care!!!

    I loved your narration. It is very engaging however I felt bad at one point where you time and again mentioned dark as something so demeaning.

    I am sure you have a pretty wide readers. Careless comments like this might hurt at least one or two of your readers.

    My sister is dark and a little short too but she is such a gem. My BIL fell in love with her character and proposed her. He is Mr. Chennai. The typical fair and handsome type. Many said the same thing that you had mentioned in your story. Some at our ear shot. I re-lived it when I read that part.
     
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    Hope you get well soon suma . Sending you my prayers and positive thoughts.
     
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    Hi suma,
    Take care of your health. We will wait. My prayers for u. God will be with you.
    Regards,
    Madhumidha
     
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    sumalynux IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear GodISONE

    I just described how the characters look..

    I Described Ramya as tall, fair and good looking girl,
    i described Rakesh and Suresh as handsome guy.....
    And Rajni as short and dark...

    And did i mention dark/short peope are not good at heart ?:idontgetit:

    My intensions are only to describe the looks of character and not to
    hurt someone, or make some one re-live their life's past....

    Its just a Fictional story... Hope you just read it as story...:bonk

    If you cant, then i request you not to read further, coz i will be talking
    more and more about Rajni(As she is bad character in this story)
     
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    Hi suma,
    Ur narration is too interesting...
    I understand that you eagerly want to write....
    More important is health... So tke rest .....
    Take care... Get well soon...
     
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