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Hidden & revealed - part xvii

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by ASHWINRAJ, Jul 19, 2013.

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  1. Jul 19, 2013 #11
    ASHWINRAJ

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    Hi Jlakshmi,

    Thanks for your feedback.
    Hope you people are bit releaved now.
    Keep reading more to know about the lovely couple!!
     
    ASHWINRAJ, Jul 19, 2013
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  2. Jul 19, 2013 #12
    VIJAYALAKSHMI06

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    :confused2:
    What is still to come??:bonk

    OMG. Is still Anu in any critical situation??? :oops:
    Waiting for the next part Ashwin.
    Keep posting it soon nah??
     
    VIJAYALAKSHMI06, Jul 19, 2013
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    Pallavi4me

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    Good part Ashwin.

    This I have expected, srikanth to be part of the baddies. I think Shiva's message has helped him in understanding the things earlier. My hopes on shiva haven't gone waste :)

    That recorder twist is very good. Happy to know. :thumbsup
     
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    ASHWINRAJ

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    Hi Vijayalakshmi,

    He he he. . .
    No worries. Keep waiting and i ll be back with the next part soon.
    Keep reading.
     
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    ASHWINRAJ

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    Hi Pallavi4me,

    Thanks for your feedback.
    You are really a keen observer!!
    Yea, obviously none of the close friend will be a betrayer and thus Shiva has also proved it to Raghav, that he is best friend.

    Ofcourse the taperecorderhas made the tale topsy-turvy.

    Keep reading to know more about the lovely couple.
    By then I ll be back with the next part soon.
     
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  6. Jul 19, 2013 #16
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    Wonderful... Nail biting... WAiting to read more :)
     
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    ASHWINRAJ

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    Hi Seepra,

    Thanks for your feedback.
    Keep reading to know more about the lovely couple and to find out what happens finally.
    Will be back soon.
     
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  8. Jul 19, 2013 #18
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    Loved it!!!!
     
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  9. Jul 19, 2013 #19
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    Hi Ashwin. Good to know that Anushka and Raghav are safe! But suspense is still there :)
     
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  10. Jul 19, 2013 #20
    Madhumidha

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    Finally Anushka and Raghav are Safe!!! Nice !!!
     
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