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My Competition Poem Want Your Opinion

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by sunkan, Feb 16, 2008.

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  1. Feb 16, 2008 #21
    sreshta

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    Dear Sunkan,
    Right poem for the season!
    Very romantic and will surely evoke the reader to fall in love...All the best to win!
    Love
    Sreshta
     
    sreshta, Feb 16, 2008
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  2. Feb 16, 2008 #22
    Tamildownunder

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    Dear Sunkan,

    Your poem is very good with the right usage of words and bringing the right expressions of a suble feeling. I wish all the best for you to win the prize in the competition.

    Regards,

    TDU
     
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  3. Feb 17, 2008 #23
    Anandchitra

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    Sundari
    Very nice my dear
    is not as easy to wear
    a talent such as yours in writing
    and being one with others in reading
    a silent crown for long
    cos it will rise and shine
    and spread its winning shine
    both near and far
    for now and forever more..

    Good luck in competition !
     
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  4. Feb 17, 2008 #24
    aquamarine

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    Mom,

    I think this is really super. You never cease to surprise me. This is really great. You have managed to put into words the thoughts that are difficult to express and are only felt.

    Love

    aqua
     
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  5. Feb 17, 2008 #25
    sunkan

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    thanku madhu,
    i don't know whether my poem would be selected there or not, but the enthusiasm shown here seems more and made me so happy that i wont regret even if my poem never got selected, as usual indus ladies have cheered so much to euphoria which i experience here is enough for me any day..sunkan
     
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  6. Feb 17, 2008 #26
    sunkan

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    thanku meena, i think i have won the crown here and it does not matter there.though i will inform if i win there..sunkan
     
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  7. Feb 17, 2008 #27
    sunkan

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    vow ramya,
    i want vandhana or vidya to come forward and conduct a competition like this in indus, it would be wonderful to see many poets here join hands and i am sure it will reach great zenith, and a wonder read in indus..sunkan
     
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  8. Feb 17, 2008 #28
    sunkan

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    thanku paulina,
    hope to bring a competition here so that you all may participate..sunkan
     
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  9. Feb 17, 2008 #29
    sunkan

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    dear sreshta,
    only i have written a love poem here, the rest have given different emotion and it is a wonder read with so many varieties, i got influenced by the valentine month and contributions..sunkan
     
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  10. Feb 17, 2008 #30
    sunkan

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    vow chithra,
    now this is what i want to say in tamil
    ide ide thaan naan sollindirunden
    awakening the poet in all is the season
    happy you could come out with words too..
    thanks pal u have made my day..
    sunkan
     
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