Love Life Part 18 - The End!

Rhea, wow very well written thank you for sharing with us.

 

ending is nice...normally writers will end up that they are married...
but according to the situation you ended very nicely...
ROCKING RHEAA!!!

 

Beautiful story Rheaa, i could see myself here.. thanks for sharing... i dont have words.. Ilites.. i am thankful to all of you....
bye for now

 

Hi Rhea,

Read the story in one go. A girl must feel safe and comfortable with her man, not monitored and controlled!!! Nikhil asking Rhea to give up the exam to receive him at the airport was the first strike! She should've woke up or at least should have put her priorities straight! And yes, reading the story from the 3rd person point of view is a lot different than being in the story ourselves. She was really blind, mute and dumb in her love! And when she said she was 'Mad'ly in love, I believe,she was MAD to believe in such love. But again, glad that she realised what she was actually in, and took steps to come out of it. There are lots of Nikhils out there, and not all Rheas are lucky enough to escape from them. They end up getting married, then scared of the society they continue living, and when they realised they cant take it anymore sometimes it becomes too late.

Very nice story. You have added suspense wherever needed that made the readers glued to the screen. The struggles of Rhea was expressed so very clearly and we saw the transformation of once-dumb-Rhea to bold-stood-for-herself-Rhea. Kudos to your writing skills.

Keep up the good work. :thumbsup

ILT