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Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by iniyamalar, Jun 13, 2011.

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  1. Jun 14, 2011 #11
    SuccessMinded

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    Awesome! Superb narration...
    Now waiting for the final one. I am thinking Dave might pass away. Inba and Thendral will become a couple again. Sean and Pavi will also become a couple and Ishwar will come back fine.
    Is this correct?
     
    SuccessMinded, Jun 14, 2011
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  2. Jun 14, 2011 #12
    Sofea

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    Again and again- You are wonderful Malar! Thanks for giving us the pleasure of reading your wonderful story! :thumbsup Though I must say that I'm kinda sad knowing that the story would be coming to an end soon :cry:. On another note, I do want to know what would happen to the rest of the story too- the suspense is just unbearable!:drowning I'm not going to predict the climax as I want to be surprised with the outcome! And I know you'll surprise me with a wonderful ending, nonetheless :cheers
     
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  3. Jun 14, 2011 #13
    DeeYo

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    I am too scared :hide::bowdown:spin
     
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  4. Jun 14, 2011 #14
    prana

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    God,whats happening here..please please save our dear Ish....

    waiting for the climax malar...

    you rock :thumbsup
     
    prana, Jun 14, 2011
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  5. Jun 14, 2011 #15
    swaran

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    Malar,you are giving us a wonderful story....there is enough of thrills,romance,action and everything till now...there was not even a single episode that i missed(glad that i dint miss)....you have/are doing a lot of homework for this story..i can feel the hours you spent in your homework to bring this wonderful story to us...i feel as if i am a pat of this story when i read the story....you are bringing the picture live with your words...great going girl...i am(asusual) waiting to read the thriller action packed happy ending(hopefully..please make it) final episode...

    take your time..come back with the bang......

    All the best.....i am waiting:)
     
    swaran, Jun 14, 2011
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  6. Jun 15, 2011 #16
    NithinSrinivas

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    WOW!! Its way too thrilling Malar!!!
    The way the get ready for action is itslef so gripping...no wonder the climax is bound to be more thrilling...Your message to the readers promises so..Hats off to you and ur wonderful narration!! :hatsoff
    Am much worried about Ish...wish hez safe until the trio reach there...:roll:
    Waiting to read the final one...
     
    NithinSrinivas, Jun 15, 2011
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  7. Jun 16, 2011 #17
    Senthaj

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    Where is the 25th episode............am waiting eagerly malar..the moment i entered office teh first page i opened was urs and....waiting for the climax......pls post it soon.
     
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  8. Jun 16, 2011 #18
    ILoveTulips

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    malar.. enga irukeenga... seekiram vaanga... ododi vandha enna yemaathi pudaandheenga..
     
    ILoveTulips, Jun 16, 2011
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  9. Jun 28, 2011 #19
    iniyamalar

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    Dear Preetha
    Thank you so much..

    It is the support from readers that make us write more..Keep coming
     
    iniyamalar, Jun 28, 2011
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    iniyamalar

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    Dear yesbee

    Thank you so much for coming in with comments.
     
    iniyamalar, Jun 28, 2011
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