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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by rgsrinivasan, Jun 13, 2011.

  1. rgsrinivasan

    rgsrinivasan IL Hall of Fame

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    "I haven't done this before.
    Leaving all my daily chores
    On a day like this is so much
    Very rare. I can't say much.

    Either you can believe it or
    You may ignore. I don't care.
    Oh! I can say just one word!
    Unbelievable!" she said towards

    Him after two long days of wait.
    And went like the fading light.
    He did not understand it at all.
    Does she really love him at all?

    Then he thought about it again,
    And seemed to glow in full.
    Note the first eight lines again.
    The first letters say it all.
     
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    Wonderful! unique way of expressing :)
     
  3. rgsrinivasan

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    Thanks for your fast and appreciative feedback Vinodhi. -rgs
     

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