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Nature - diverse and powerful

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by vinodhi, Jun 11, 2011.

  1. vinodhi

    vinodhi New IL'ite

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    The sun shines bright
    Yet the mild wind chills;
    Its inappropriate to ask,
    which is powerful, for...
    Both are mighty in their own!
    And this is the thought I got
    While going for a walk!

    Row of trees which stood bare
    Sprang into life within a week
    Colorful flowers blossom all over
    Dancing to the chirps and squeaks
    How do they know this is the time?
    Where was this life hidden all winter?
    Seasons are four, knowing their power and time

    The nature is so wonderful
    With hills, plains, oceans and deserts
    With all its hues and colors
    Few calm and few noisy
    Whatever it is, it so beautiful
    And this is the thought I got
    While going for a walk!
     
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  2. rgsrinivasan

    rgsrinivasan IL Hall of Fame

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    Thats the advantage of a poet going for a walk. Now we all are seeing what you saw, by your nice lines Vinodhi. Thanks for sharing. -rgs
     
  3. vinodhi

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    Thank you very much for the first comment RGS :)
     
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    A poet's line describes the beauty of nature as we see it by our own!
    wonderful describing lines of nature!:thumbsup
     
  5. vinodhi

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    Thanks a lot Yamini.. And the comments from you and RGS definitely encourages me to write more ..Thanks both of you :)
     

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