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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by rgsrinivasan, Jun 7, 2011.

  1. rgsrinivasan

    rgsrinivasan IL Hall of Fame

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    You took that big yellow lorry
    And rammed it against the wall.
    She came out quick and carried,
    You safe and cleaned it all.

    You saw the water bottle
    And ran to pick it fast.
    She was a bit too startled
    And reached there but last.

    You opened it by then and
    Poured all the water down.
    She sighed a bit and bent
    To wipe it without a frown.

    Just then the telephone rang.
    You vanished from there fast.
    And put it down with a bang.
    She knew not who it was.

    You slept after she sang
    A song and cradled you.
    She doesn't have that long,
    Her chores are not a few.

    You wake up soon and start
    Being active just as usual.
    She had an early start,
    But never stops as usual.
     
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  2. satchitananda

    satchitananda IL Hall of Fame

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    A beautiful ode to a mother RGS. :)
     
  3. rgsrinivasan

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    Well, well! Got a bit moved to see a feedback at this hour Satchi. Feel very happy to get that from you. Thanks and good night. -rgs
     
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    Hi RGS,
    what a reflection of any mother's experience! I could relate that to me too..Am sure many many ladies here would have experienced this..Thanks for such a nice poem and Congrats :)
     
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    Thanks for your warm appreciation Vinodhi. -rgs
     

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