Hi friends, This is the first time I'm posting something like this. Kindly pour in your criticisms, suggestions, ideas for improvement etc... expecting all sorts of comments (be it +ve or -ve) OUR LITTLE PRINCE Let him fly High in the sky As would a kite Sail at height Let him soar Far and wide And himself explore When we guide The strand in our hands Holding him safe and sound Let him cover spans Aware that he is still bound Let him be truthful Loyal, brave, humble And always youthful Then never will he stumble Let him not be scared Let him be prepared To face the world with courage When we are besides to encourage The earth, the sky and the sun Should reach him as a blessing Good and gentle will be our son Without too much pressing Free as a bird, but bound to us With strings from the heart Will shape him to be just and righteous Proud, noble and smart That’s our little prince Who filled our days with surprise, Joy and warmth; ever since He came as an angel in disguise
Thankyou so much for the prompt response and encouragement. I tried rhyming words..does it look so childish?
It doesn't sound childish at all, though written for a child! May be, some of my verses posted here could come under that category madam. -rgs
Very nice one Reshmi..which depicts the dream of every parent. May your wish and dream come true! sriniketan