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Our little prince

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by reshmirn, Jan 20, 2011.

  1. reshmirn

    reshmirn Bronze IL'ite

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    Hi friends,
    This is the first time I'm posting something like this.
    Kindly pour in your criticisms, suggestions, ideas for improvement etc...
    expecting all sorts of comments (be it +ve or -ve)

    OUR LITTLE PRINCE

    Let him fly
    High in the sky
    As would a kite
    Sail at height

    Let him soar
    Far and wide
    And himself explore
    When we guide

    The strand in our hands
    Holding him safe and sound
    Let him cover spans
    Aware that he is still bound

    Let him be truthful
    Loyal, brave, humble
    And always youthful
    Then never will he stumble

    Let him not be scared
    Let him be prepared
    To face the world with courage
    When we are besides to encourage

    The earth, the sky and the sun
    Should reach him as a blessing
    Good and gentle will be our son
    Without too much pressing

    Free as a bird, but bound to us
    With strings from the heart
    Will shape him to be just and righteous
    Proud, noble and smart

    That’s our little prince
    Who filled our days with surprise,
    Joy and warmth; ever since
    He came as an angel in disguise



     
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  2. rgsrinivasan

    rgsrinivasan IL Hall of Fame

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    It is as cute as your little son Reshmi. Very nice to read. Thanks. -rgs
     
  3. reshmirn

    reshmirn Bronze IL'ite

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    Thankyou so much for the prompt response and encouragement.
    I tried rhyming words..does it look so childish?
     
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    rgsrinivasan IL Hall of Fame

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    It doesn't sound childish at all, though written for a child! May be, some of my verses posted here could come under that category madam. -rgs
     
  5. Sriniketan

    Sriniketan IL Hall of Fame

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    Very nice one Reshmi..which depicts the dream of every parent.
    May your wish and dream come true! :thumbsup:

    sriniketan
     

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