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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by twinsmom, Aug 24, 2007.

  1. rekhaprahalad

    rekhaprahalad New IL'ite

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    hi

    you touched my heart

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    :wave
     
  2. BlueBoy

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    COOL...nice meaning n nicely narrated... !!!
     
  3. twinsmom

    twinsmom Silver IL'ite

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    Hi folks,
    Thank you... Poems are my nemesis... I never dabble in them if I can... the very few ones I have written have just come out of me... If anyone put a gun at my head and told me to write a poem to save my life... I'll sure be shot dead...

    So...when my attempts at versifying gets appreciated, it feels good!

    :thankyou2:
     
  4. sujathae

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    Dear twinsmom, That was a great one. Nice way of narrating the most intricate relationship of a man and his wife. Keep it up.

    regards,

    sujatha
     
  5. twinsmom

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    Thank you sujatha... Most of my stuff is like this involving feelings towrds my husband and kids... Only one silly thing I have written... I'll post it!
     

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