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My Lord Krishna

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by RatnaMalliswari, Aug 30, 2021.

  1. RatnaMalliswari

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    Master of mischief
    Prince of dwaraka
    He remains charismatic
    personalities in Indian history.

    Made Legendary of love story
    His flute vibrates,all living creatures
    reach to spiritual sky.

    He preached a sermon on the
    battlefield is known as
    the Bhagvad Gita.

    His divine song which is
    a spiritual guideline for humanity.

    He is power of spiritual awakening
    what else phrases to use,to explain about your glory they are abundant.

    I bow down to you
    for your warm wishes.

    Wish You All Happy krishna janmashtami
     
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    Hello Sir
    Thank you for your like for my poetry.
    Regards
    Ratna
     
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    The song is timely highlighting the special virtues of the Lord.
    It was good in third person but in the concluding portion it switched to direct conversation with the Lord. That is tad out of character. But we poets know the flooding of emotions that ebb profusely!
     
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    Hello Sir
    Correctly said,I was praising lord Krishna,so much to say about him,one poetry is not sufficient,the end I concluded -bow down to receive his blessings.
    Hope I can write more and more about his leelas in my upcoming poetries.
    Thank you sir for spending your valuable time for reading and liking the post.
    Regards
    Ratna
     
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    Hi @maalti
    Thank you for liking my poetry.
    Regards
    Ratna
     
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    Hi @SuiDhaaga
    Thank you for spending your valuable time here and like to poetry.
    Regards
    Ratna
     
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    Hi ranju5
    I guess this is my first message to you.
    I thank you for reading and liking my poetry.
    Regards
    Ratna
     

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