A thin sharp needle…. A look of it made my tears role down all by itself… Turned to look for help… Though I was the one who decided to come here… The sight of needle made me to shiver… First idea to run away from spot… Tears hide my sight… While a hand with needle came near… A pair of hands held my shoulders tight…. Trying to make me realize his presence… Hugged my father… Complaining it will be very painful… Than insisting to return home… There… Had my ear pierced.… Not for first time but second…. With new set of earrings…
LOL. Very lovely and humourous poem. What a contrast, and I was imaging many a things which can prick until I came to the end! Really good and funny!
amma ilaya amma love panna namalum pana vendiyathu than i love it too and i am and will always create hye hye when someone try to touch it or while amma try to apply oil in my hair ennai irangida kudathu parunga
Caide i thought you have written about an injection needle.Aha very nice narration of ear piercing needle.
Dear @Caide , OMG, your capacity to create suspense is great! A pin prick on your ears brings a lovely poem from you!! Enjoyed!!!