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  1. Sep 8, 2016 #1
    Caide

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    The train horn sound filled the station....
    Crowd, Families, Relations moved back...
    Waving to their dear ones...
    I looked at you with broad smile…
    Trying not to hug you in public…
    With usual haircut….
    Making me to wonder....
    Whether the haircut makes you handsome....
    Or the smiling face...
    You looked handsome…
    Though you are going to stay away for six months…
    And going to travel from one place to another…
    I won’t warn you to take care of yourself…
    A guy who carries his family in heart…..
    And Country batch on his forehead cap…
    I am sure you will stay safe…
    I won’t cry…..
    I won’t hold on to you…
    As I know…
    You are my solider….
    You are Our Country’s army man…
    Though I might miss you…
    I will wait for you to return….
    As a Soldier’s wife I will wait for you….
    With our son and our family….
    Looking at you…
    With love….
    With proud….
     
    Caide, Sep 8, 2016
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  2. Sep 8, 2016 #2
    vaidehi71

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    Hi,
    Beautiful poem with wonderful words, really liked every word of this poem!
    Thanks,
    Vaidehi
     
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    Caide

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    thank you :)
     
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    Lathasv

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    J, great poem ... You read a soldier's wife mind very well... Hats off to soldiers and their families too
     
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    Awesome Caide...very nice poem!

    I loved it so much!

    IT reminded me of one more poem but that's a sad one! you might beat me if I put It now. Will share it later with you!
     
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    Caide

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    yeah but sometimes their wives cry for their lose but i think they should feel proud though the lose is very big she should feel proud rt
     
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    Lathasv

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    Dual post
     
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    Caide

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    no no please do share there is nothing wrong in sharing we all might find it super than this :D
     
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    Lathasv

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    Anything is easy to say then done. Soldier's wife also a normal woman and she has also same feelings like us.. It is difficult to forget reality and feel proud for her husband's bravery
     
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    Caide

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    yeah agreed but she married him knowing that he is solider right that is why i think like this ....
     
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