1. Have an Interesting Snippet to Share : Click Here
    Dismiss Notice

The college days!!

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by meril, Nov 7, 2013.

  1. meril

    meril Gold IL'ite

    Messages:
    371
    Likes Received:
    637
    Trophy Points:
    175
    Gender:
    Female
    The college days.. 13 B

    Akshay opened the door partially to see a girl sitting on the couch sipping a glass of orange juice, still clueless he opened the door wider and heard a familiar voice say, "Hello young man!"

    He turned back to see uncle Ram (His dad's ex-colleague), sitting on the couch beside the door.

    "Hello uncle", said Akshay sounding surprised by the visit.

    "Come in..come in", said uncle Ram welcoming Akshay to his own house.

    Akshay left hold on the outer door knob and got hold on to the inside knob to shut the door.

    "Uncle, you brought a new car?" enquired Akshay.

    "Yes son, it was time to sell my old scooter" said Uncle Ram.

    "Yes, it was time.", said Akshay agreeing to Uncle Ram and rethought of it when he heard a giggling voice which came from the unknown girl.

    "Yes..yes, the younger generation wouldn't like it", said Uncle Ram looking at his daughter Maya.

    Akshay looked once again at Maya, a cute girl he thought to himself and took off his eyes before she noticed him looking.

    "Akshay, do you remember Maya?", asked a lady who sat next to Uncle Ram.

    "That's our daughter", said Uncle Ram giving no time to Akshay to answer.

    Akshay and Maya exchanged smiles and said "Hello" to each other.


    "They haven't met for years now", said Akshay's Mom.
    "Yes, it has been long", said Maya's mom agreeing.

    "Let us leave now", said Maya's mom tapping Uncle Ram.

    "Yes, let us go now, we were waiting for you", said Uncle Ram looking at Akshay.

    Akshay led the way out of the house, and walked to the car with them.

    Uncle ram noticed Akshay looking at the car, and asked "Do you want to try driving it" lending the car key to him.

    "No, thanks uncle, some other time maybe" said Akshay.

    "Come home, sometime said Akshay's mom to Mayas, holding her hands."You people too can come" said Maya's mom in response.

    Maya made sure she looked up at Akshay and said "Bye" before she entered the back seat of the car.

    Akshay helped Uncle Ram by signalling directions in order to take the car off the house premises to the pocket road.

    Uncle Ram, waved at Akshay and his mom and speeds the car off to the main road.

    To be continued..
     
    2 people like this.
  2. springsnb

    springsnb Gold IL'ite

    Messages:
    649
    Likes Received:
    318
    Trophy Points:
    138
    Gender:
    Female
    its really good meril, i don't know how i miss this story,but anyway finished in one strech
     
  3. meril

    meril Gold IL'ite

    Messages:
    371
    Likes Received:
    637
    Trophy Points:
    175
    Gender:
    Female
    You finished reading the story in one go, that's great proves you have enjoyed it!! I'm pleased to know you have started reading this story of mine as well.. :-D
     
  4. meril

    meril Gold IL'ite

    Messages:
    371
    Likes Received:
    637
    Trophy Points:
    175
    Gender:
    Female
    The College Days-Part 14

    Akshay got back home once Uncle Ram drove away and noticed a small package which contained sweets.

    "Where did you get these, mom?" enquired Akshay already holding a laddu.

    "Ram uncle got them" answered Akshay's mom adding "their daughter-Maya scored 87% in 12[SUP]th[/SUP]!!"

    "Ohh, I thought it was her wedding!", said Akshay laughing at his own lame joke.

    "Not funny Akshay!", said his mom. She is so smart and really focused on her education. That is how youngsters should be!

    Akshay kept his focus on the sweets, deciding which one to go for next and finally said "ok mom okk" I understand she has impressed you a lot." sounding the least bit interested in the conversation.

    "Who wouldn't?.. Who wouldn't like students who are academically smart?" stated his mom giving Akshay a look from the corner of her eye.

    "Alright!! Alright!.. I'm out of here", said Akshay escaping to his room anticipating the rest of the speech darting his academic performance.
    ___

    The next day at college..

    Akshay entered the college's wide open gate to see Ashika getting off from her brother's bike.

    Akshay didn't wait for Ashika and walked away with Sera and Amal.

    "Hey Sera!", said Akshay to start off a conversation.
    "Hey Akshay! You are surprisingly early said Sera with a teasing tone. "I am not late every day", protested Akshay.

    "Yes, he is never late expecting for the days that end with "day" said Amal joining Sera in teasing Akshay. "Sera enjoying his comment and laughed aloud." To which Akshay responded, "Very funny!!" and knocked on Sera's head with a bright smile on his face.

    Ashika was behind them, watching all the fun they seem to be having. The conversation was not audible to her but she surely knew they were having a good time at college unlike her.

    Amal, Akshay and Sera entered the classroom simultaneously and were welcomed by their classmates; on the other hand, Ashika entered the classroom unnoticed by anyone- at least that's what she felt.

    To be continued
     
    2 people like this.
  5. ANKITHA01

    ANKITHA01 Silver IL'ite

    Messages:
    118
    Likes Received:
    78
    Trophy Points:
    68
    Gender:
    Female
    good 1............but so.........small..post meril..:bang
     
  6. meril

    meril Gold IL'ite

    Messages:
    371
    Likes Received:
    637
    Trophy Points:
    175
    Gender:
    Female
    Thank you Ankitha for your feedback!! Was it such a small post?? :roll:
    Will try to post soon!! :)
     
  7. Deepu04

    Deepu04 IL Hall of Fame

    Messages:
    2,857
    Likes Received:
    1,484
    Trophy Points:
    308
    Gender:
    Female
    Meril, please post the long episodes ....
     
    1 person likes this.
  8. srilathab

    srilathab Silver IL'ite

    Messages:
    201
    Likes Received:
    122
    Trophy Points:
    93
    Gender:
    Female
    waiting for the next part, please do post longer episodes
     
  9. Lalitha Shivaguru

    Lalitha Shivaguru Platinum IL'ite

    Messages:
    3,774
    Likes Received:
    310
    Trophy Points:
    215
    Gender:
    Female
    Dear Meril,

    Finished all the posts till date...

    Good story line... reading the college story makes me nostalgic...

    will be a regular here Meril :)
     
  10. springsnb

    springsnb Gold IL'ite

    Messages:
    649
    Likes Received:
    318
    Trophy Points:
    138
    Gender:
    Female
    I am little busy these days but when i get some time i am logging to this site and looks for ur stories and angellic.... but do post frequently meril
     

Share This Page