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A cake to be baked!

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by prettydevil, Aug 28, 2013.

  1. prettydevil

    prettydevil Platinum IL'ite

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    Fighting with me to bake as planned
    With apron around and spatula in hand
    Puzzled what to do, or where to start
    your naughty eyes look at me, melting my heart

    I try to help you, but you won't listen
    just making me want to, change my decision
    You look at me, and I again fall in your trap
    This time,in my arms, I wrap you around

    You mix the flour with some more water
    I cheat on you and replace the batter
    We put the cake in oven for some time
    watching the timer, you mummble and rhyme

    Ting Tadang, the beep makes a sound
    you run to the oven, and there on it you pound
    I shout at you, coz the oven is hot
    you say, I know momma, I am wearing the gloves you got

    We remove the cake, and I see you full of joy
    Shouting with happiness, the sight so wonderful, Oh boy!
    You tell me that we will cut the cake with Daddy,
    but I know you want to taste it now, so badly

    So I tell you, that we will bake again
    When Daddy comes, he will be your chef assitant
    You are now jumping with joy, all over the place
    I wish I can capture forever, this innocent face

    With your little hands, you feed me cake
    tears in my eyes, saying wonderfully it is made
    you feel so happy and hug me tighly again
    And I think in my heart, don't know this will happen when

    But I"ll wait, coz I know some day will come
    when I will be the reason, for you to be at home
    Loving, cuddling and hugging me
    and with a naughty smile, calling me mommy!


    P.S : @Mods - I have already written this poem in Dinny's thread "I love your lies", but just wanted to keep it in separate thread as this poem is kind of very close to me from all my other poems. If mods think that this is inappropriate, please feel free to delete this thread and I can record down the post no. from Dinny's thread in my personal diary ;-) Thanks!
     
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  2. Anitap

    Anitap IL Hall of Fame

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    Pretty soon pd. pretty soon.
     
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  3. prettydevil

    prettydevil Platinum IL'ite

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    wow Anita.. that was super fast ;-) Thanks :-D

    I hope so too. TOUCHWOOD. Love you for saying that :kiss
     
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  4. Dinny

    Dinny IL Hall of Fame

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    could i say it again???

    this is one of your best poems PrettyDee....

    i hope that cute lil baby with tiny feet and tiny toes arrives soon and reads this poem here.He'll love it too. :)
     
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    prettydevil Platinum IL'ite

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    Thanks Dear. I hope so too, that my dream comes true some day soon :)

    but I will love it more if it will be "She"ll love it too" ;-)

    I just wrote Oh boy! in my poem, as I didn't find anything else to rhyme :hide:

    Here is the link to one more poem, especially for you , I had written loonnngggg time back. I am sure you will love this too.

    http://www.indusladies.com/forums/poems-and-poets-place/209044-a-to-be-moms-thought.html
     
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    sravanitenali IL Hall of Fame

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    Very nice poem dear...May God bless you with cute LO soon!!
     
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    arch1209 Platinum IL'ite

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    P D - crochet queen, dress designer, snippet master and know poetess at large!!! Just how many more talents do you posses?
     
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    Thats a sweet and touching one, PD. Enjoyed reading it. Wish you all the very best! -rgs
     
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    lovely poem pd.

    wishing you.
     
  10. zainabsarfraz

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    awww such a nice poem PD, may god fullfil your wish at the soonest.
     
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