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The Stalker

Discussion in 'Snippets of Life (Non-Fiction)' started by Devika Menon, Mar 5, 2008.

  1. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    Devika,

    Your style of writing is simply superb.

    Stalker yes there is one in everybody mind...If you listen to it and act, lot of problems are solved....

    I always believe you should have the fear/respect of your conscience more than fear of God....
     
  2. Devika Menon

    Devika Menon Gold IL'ite

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    Dear Roopa ,

    Thanks for writing in and for the words of appreciation.

    God Bless,

    Devika

     
  3. Devika Menon

    Devika Menon Gold IL'ite

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    Dear Janani,

    Thankyou so much for appreciating the article.Wanted to send a message across and if it has reached then i consider my task done!

    God Bless,
    Devika


    quote=Jananikrithsan;248773]Dear Devika,
    That was a great piece.When you know you are about to do something wrong that might hurt you and dear ones it is better to stop youself before you are in for major trouble.Sometimes we make mistakes but it is important to realise and rectify it.
    Noteworthy snippet, great style, nice language. No wonder it got nominated to the FP. Keep them coming!!!![/quote]
     
  4. Devika Menon

    Devika Menon Gold IL'ite

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    Dear Shanvy,

    Thanks for the FB. I am glad you enjoyed it.
    Your right the fear of God helps us to see things in their right perspective .It may be very easy to fool another person , but fooling oneself is a losing battle with your own conscience.


    God Bless,
    Devika


    quote=shanvy;248774]Devika,

    Your style of writing is simply superb.

    Stalker yes there is one in everybody mind...If you listen to it and act, lot of problems are solved....

    I always believe you should have the fear/respect of your conscience more than fear of God....[/quote]
     
  5. SoaringSpirit

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    Hi Devika,
    Your beautifully penned story clearly drives home the point "In the end, we are only answerable to ourselves".

    You have arrived dear! You are a writer in your own write (pun intended)! It was a very gripping writing.

    Great going!
    SS
     
    Last edited: Mar 6, 2008
  6. Devika Menon

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    Hey SS ,

    Thankyou so much . You def sent my spirits soaring.
    Youre very right dear, in the end we are only answerable to ourselves ... So very true!!

    Devika


     
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    Hi Devika,

    Superbly written, I just wish there were more guys on the lines of the husband in your story around ! Congrats on the mind-blowing peep into a woman's mind !
     
  8. malspie

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    Hi Devika,

    Wonderful piece.

    In a place like Mumbai, this happens everyday, with a twist in the tale, the stalker is ignored..

    The sub-conscious mind awakens us from the hotchpoth thoughts and protects us from those tears which are going to flow forever. She listened to herself and gathered her present and secured her future.

    BowBowBowBowBow
     
  9. Devika Menon

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    Dear Sumeru,

    Thankyou so much for appreciating the article. More guys on the lines of the husband... dont we all wish.. If only wishes were horses..
    I am delighted to know that you liked it

    Regards,

    Devika.



     
  10. aquamarine

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    Dear Devika,

    A very beautiful piece, so many emotions and it was so realistic...thank you for good read my friend.

    warm wishes,

    Aqua.
     

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