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Darkness my friend

Discussion in 'Kids Korner' started by iyerviji, Jan 28, 2008.

  1. iyerviji

    iyerviji Finest Post Winner

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    I am giving below a poem written by my son Vinay P Iyer

    The sun has set and the night has come
    As I leave my home, I hear birds hum
    When I wonder, this night will end
    Till then O' darkness, will you be my friend

    All I see is the clear black sky
    I am tired and hungry but the spirit's high
    My heart tells me my goal isnear
    My friend, O' darkness, will you drive away my fear

    My legs keep walking I dont know where I'm going
    In the big and dark mountains, I hear silence echoing
    I stop all of a sudden, I dont know where I stand
    My friend, O' darkness, guide me , hold my hand

    The sun comes out and already its day
    I drive away my sleep, i dont know what to say
    The darkness gone, yeah I have lost my friend
    Now that its day, why do I wish it toend


    Viji
     
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  2. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    HI viji,

    Looks like your son is chip of the old block(you:queen)...it is a nice one...convey the same to him..
     
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    Hai Viji,

    Ur son's has gud creativity!!!!!! encourage him to continue!!!!!!!

    convey my best wishes to him
     
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    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Hello Viji
    That is a beautiful poem by your son making darkness as his friend great

    All the best wishes to him.
     
  5. iyerviji

    iyerviji Finest Post Winner

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    Dear Shanthi, Aruna, and Honey

    Thanks a lot for the appreciation. God Bless U

    Viji
     
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    Jaishree123 Senior IL'ite

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    hi viji

    ur son has great talent.
    encourage him.
    I reallly appreciate his efforts.

    Thanks
    Jaishree:bowdown
     
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    great talent do encourage him and pl keep in mind to give space when serious study starts, may he become doctor or engineer but let the poet ever remain in heart ..sunkan
     
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    iyerviji Finest Post Winner

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    Dear Sunkan

    I forgot to tell u allthat my son will be now 30 yrs on February 4, 2008.
    This poem was written by him when he was in school. After B.com he
    completed C.A. and now is a Director in a Company . He and his friend are managing the Company. They started the Company in December 2006. Now he has no time for writing poems.

    Viji

     
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    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    dear viji,
    u can tap that back, get a wonderful book plain or some handpaper made with flowers natural and a wonderful pen and gift it to him, for old time sake may be on the valentine day which is very near and c if he will write something in that as the book is from you..
     
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    iyerviji Finest Post Winner

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    Dear Sunkan

    Thank U for your valuable suggestion. As u said i will gift it to him a book and a pen
    why to wait for valentine day i wil give it on his birthday which is on February 4, 2008 and also his wedding anniversary.

    viji


     

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