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My sweet heart!!!!!

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Lalitha Shivaguru, Sep 21, 2011.

  1. Lalitha Shivaguru

    Lalitha Shivaguru Platinum IL'ite

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    MY SWEET HEART



    As I sat on the steps in a melancholic mood
    the river caressing my feet softly...
    the gentle breeze, the cool water
    creating a hypnotic spell….

    As I look upwards at the twilight sky
    the huge ball of fire
    Spreading its flares across the horizon
    bathing the sky in a vermilion hue….

    The huge ball resembling my lover’s bindi
    And her crimson saree spread over
    the entire expanse………..
    Oh! What a lovely sight to behold!!!!

    Her fair skin glowing in the
    deep crimson colour
    intermingled with gold
    making her glow ….

    And her fiery eyes sparkling
    her rosy lips showing her pearly white teeth..
    With her bhulakku* swaying gently
    as her lips broaden to give a sweet smile…..

    Her dark hair spreading itself
    merging with her crimson drape...
    Enveloping the entire length & breadth
    in a passionate embrace

    As I yearn for her in the
    enveloping darkness;
    Mocking me with her disappearance
    making me cry in pangs of separation..

    As my eyes become wet,
    A cool light engulfs the night
    Bringing in the much needed solace
    As she emerges in a different avatar

    The coolness which she radiates…
    Contradicting the fiery vision
    Draping herself in pure white
    And the tresses merging in the darkness

    Her eyes twinkling like little stars
    Oh my dear! Why are you making me cry?
    Is it sheer happiness on seeing you?
    Or is it that I am unable to reach you?

    You are my soul, my entire being;
    Without you I am none
    Oh my sweet heart, allow me to
    be at your feet, seeing your lovely face...

    Take me in a sweet embrace
    Smother me with the divine kiss
    And crush me in your arms
    And make me one with you

    This is my only desire,
    Sole purpose to be alive;
    Thinking of you always
    Pining for you…..

    Take me in your fold
    Oh my lord!
    My sweet heart
    Oh my Rajeshwari!

    * bh
    ulakku = a nose ornament worn between the nostrils


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  2. abi445

    abi445 Silver IL'ite

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    Hai Lalitha,
    Such a wonderful poem!!!!! Nice to see your sweet heart Goddess..........
     
  3. Lalitha Shivaguru

    Lalitha Shivaguru Platinum IL'ite

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    Thanks a lot abi and also for first to comment.

    You made my day dear.

     
  4. rgsrinivasan

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    Just was able to recollect a bit of Soundarya Lahari and Akilandeshwari thuthi, when I read this Lalitha madam. Enjoyed reading this. Thanks. -rgs
     
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    knbg Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear Lalithaji,
    Nice poem with your experience with divinity......you are blessed to experience the bliss of Abhirami bhattar.....
    Thanks for sharing ......
     
  6. Lalitha Shivaguru

    Lalitha Shivaguru Platinum IL'ite

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    Dear Rgs sir,

    I think you forgot our pact of not addressing each other with a suffix :)

    Thanks a lot for your kind visit and you really touched my heart with such a lofty praise...I am not worth even an iota of the same.


     
  7. Lalitha Shivaguru

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    Dear Knbg,

    Where is Abhirama Bhattar and myself.... I just cannot come near the speck of dust on his feet. Thanks a lot for the kind visit and words dear. You made my day :)



     
  8. SARASVADIVU

    SARASVADIVU Silver IL'ite

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    Dear Lalitha,

    Fell in love with your subtle,suave and swashbuckling verses, to the extent I did not keep a count on how many times I had read it!
    SUPREME VERSES that truly brings out your love for HER..
    I'm sure it must have indeed been our Ma who has crept inside you while you were writing this!
    Saras.
     
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    vjbunny IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear Lalitha...
    Your Love for her has come out so nicely that even my heart wants to sing in unison with you..
    Oh MY Hrudayeshwari come n take thy child you have left so far I am tired of crying forever ...
     
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  10. Lalitha Shivaguru

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    Dear Saras,

    Thanks is a small word but I do not have any other word too. Your call, your comment just made me very emotional. I am really not sure how I wrote this poem.. Each word came on its own and found their place there.

    My bow to you my dear...thanks once again.


     

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