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Discussion in 'Regional Poetry' started by natpudan, Feb 16, 2010.

  1. natpudan

    natpudan Gold IL'ite

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    பட்டினிச் சாவு

    வானில் பறக்குது வண்ணத்துப் பூச்சி;
    அடுப்பில் பறக்குது விட்டில் பூச்சி.

    தொட்டிலில் அழுவது குழந்தை;
    கட்டிலில் கிடப்பது கடன் பட்ட கணவன்;
    இடையில் தவிப்பது தாயான மனைவி.

    வண்ணத்துப் பூச்சியின்,
    வண்ணங்கள் இவர்கள் வாழ்க்கையில்,
    வாராதோ? வசந்தம் வீசாதோ?
    பட்டினிக் கொடுமை இந்த பத்தினியின்,
    வாழ்கையில் இருந்து பறந்து போகாதோ?

    (வாழ்கையின் விளிம்பில் விவசாயி)
     
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  2. Suhania

    Suhania Senior IL'ite

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    Nice one natpudan
     
  3. deepa04

    deepa04 Gold IL'ite

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    dear nats,
    enna ippadi , periya baramana kavithai.
    kavithai thalaipe, kankalanga vaippathaga ullathu.
    nalla kavithai, anal ithupondra kavithai karuthukkalukku idamillamal pogattum.
    valarndhu selikkattum manithasamuthayam.

    when i see this, a scene from the film BHARATHI ,remains in my mind.
    in that film barathi fells for the same problem.
     
  4. Sudha Kailas

    Sudha Kailas IL Hall of Fame

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    Yes friend........agree with you !!!
    We see so much wastage in this part of the world but places like in Africa where famine and poverty lies, people are struggling/waiting for their single bread !!!
     
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    susri Silver IL'ite

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    Yathaarthamaana varigal :thumbsup. Very true. Very nice poem dear.
     
  6. natpudan

    natpudan Gold IL'ite

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    Thank you Sujatha.
     
  7. natpudan

    natpudan Gold IL'ite

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    reality pains, pains should be taken to eradicate these occurances.

    Thani Oruvanukku Unavillai Yenil,

    Jagaththinai Azhiththuiduvom,

    Yendru Sonnadhum Bharathi Thaanae?
     
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    Soldier Gold IL'ite

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    Manathai killum thalaippu
    Miga nallathor padaippu
    Padithathum varugirathu manathudippu!!!

    Bare truth given as a crux.

    Keep going man!!:thumbsup

    (see my reply to good news)
     
  9. natpudan

    natpudan Gold IL'ite

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    Sudha,

    It is such a sad thing to come across.

    Either it is the natural calamities or political instabilities or lanja laavanyam - the reason for all this.
     
  10. natpudan

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    Thanks Susri.

    Varumaiyin Kodumai

    Vilaiyaa Payirinaal

    Varuththaththai Vilaivikkirathu.
     

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