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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by rgsrinivasan, May 18, 2017.

  1. rgsrinivasan

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    You are not the same anymore.
    You feel that you can't bear it now.
    How long and for how much more?
    You anguish and brave it somehow.

    Your life has not been made up of
    A rosy path, but you didn't give up.
    Patiently crossing thorns , you laughed
    At your own follies and moved up.

    Problems do come aplenty to
    Those who can endure them all.
    They all aren't rich or wiser, true!
    These rare ones will not have a fall!

    Compared to where you had been
    You are always bettering yourself. Yes!
    indeed you have never turned mean
    To anyone whom you saw as helpless!

    You will be able to cross
    This one too for, you're good.
    There is but no greater loss
    Than giving up. Lets move ahead!

    Find out whom you can count.
    Ask them their time and support.
    There are surely many other rounds
    Bringing you victory and more comfort.
     
  2. LakshmiKMBhat

    LakshmiKMBhat Gold IL'ite

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    A very strong person indeed, a person we can depend upon. Regards, Lakshmi
     
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    Thanks Lakshmi KM Bhat for your like and feedback. These are self motivating posts that I occasionally write to myself.
    Happy to receive a response. -rgs
     
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    Viswamitra Finest Post Winner

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    Dear RGS,

    I know for sure you really meant a general approach to life but for some strange reason, it read like you have written a consolation note to all the Americans for their recent dismay. :)

    Viswa
     
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    Very inspiring poem indeed!
    Reminded of'yes, you can' of Obama.
    Jayasala 42
     
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    Rgs sir,
    A truly positive and motivating read. We are all in need of such thoughts on various occasions.
     
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    :) Well, Liked your sense of humor Viswa. "If one needs to realize the value of something good, let him lose it", goes a saying.
    Hope things will settle sooner! -rgs
     
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    Thanks Jayasala madam, for your appreciation. Happy to receive your feedback. Will read Obama's victory message.-rgs
     
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    Thanks Joylokhi for your appreciation and feedback. Please do address me as 'rgs'. Thats enough Madam. -rgs
     
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