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You Are Missing In My Heart!

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by Rajeni, Jun 2, 2016.

  1. Lata6

    Lata6 Gold IL'ite

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    oh my, she got the shock of her life I think, maybe she will start teasing him now that beans are spilled or maybe she will have a misunderstanding thinking there is someone in his life.
     
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    Rajeni, thank you for this cute little update :banana: Semaya ya irundhadhu pa conversations ellam raschi raschi padichen :cheer: as usual kalakitinga. Sam aunty avalo weight party yo :);) Nice ya....But kadaisila ippadi matti vittutingale...Already Nethra is fuming in idhula idhu veraya...Oru vela nethra tube light ah irundhu Yaru Anni'n ketpangalo :hearteyes:

    Thanks Dear for giving such lovely update even at your busy schedule. :smile:

     
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    lovely episode enjoyed each and every bit of it. v forget everything when v r reading.......
     
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    anupama1 Platinum IL'ite

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    .... ‘carry her? Do you think it’s possible… with a horse? I took an elephant my boy’ ”...
    such natural narration, liked it very much.

    Now waiting for Nethra's reaction regarding "anni"....
     
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    stayblessed Platinum IL'ite

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    Ha ha ha R, laughed like anything.
    Awww.. so cute.
    What a stormy entry by Arundhathi?
    super R, i like all the counters you give throughout the story via the characters. Yours is a innate and intelligent writing.
    OMG :tearsofjoy::tearsofjoy:
    Rajeni you made us laugh like anything in this episode. Can visualise Abhis reaction through your words.
    :clap2::clap2: splendid narration R. You exactly know to word a story, the dialogues are excellent.
    beautiful, beautiful.
    Oh God, how is Nethra going to interpret it?

    So far i liked Abhi a lot, but am starting to like Arundhathi more now.
     
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    peddadas Platinum IL'ite

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    Nethra is going to think that Abhi had someone in his heart..she might draw a solid line herself in between them...lol
    PS
     
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    leenam05 Platinum IL'ite

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    Nice episode Rajeni dear.......
    So Hide & Seek started huh? Lets see how Abhi confesses his love?
     
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    Omg semma ending @Rajeni .. I think nethra would have blushed hearing that sentence.. ;-)
     
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    RajanIdea I think Netheravon will get angry some flashback is there for her
     
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