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You And Me ... Me And You

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by jskls, May 23, 2018.

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  1. May 23, 2018 #1
    jskls

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    Joy and sorrow
    A universal feeling
    If I could feel yours and
    You could feel mine
    You and I will be one

    True Colors many
    Our eyes see
    If I could see yours and
    You could see mine
    Our world will be a
    Beautiful Rainbow

    Rhythm and Rhyme
    Every heart sings
    If I could sing to
    Your notes
    And you could dance
    To my tune
    It will be a
    A musical melody

    Love and being Loved
    Every heart’s wish
    If I could feel your love and
    You could feel mine
    Love would be universal
    And our beautiful World
    Will be in harmony

    Inspired by a musical performance
     
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    GeetaKashyap

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    So beautiful, @jskls. If the two people in any relationship can do so, life will indeed be a beautiful journey. The world will be a better place.
     
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    You write so well and convey big things in simple and nice words. Loved this jskls.
     
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    Thanks Geetha. We live in a diverse world. Real unity lies in accepting this diversity. Went to a music presentation where the teacher took so much effort to teach Chinese Japanese Guatamela Spanish songs to the children . With rising hate crimes this teacher used her music to teach unity in diversity. Love all was the theme. That was my expression too. It was written with Loving one another with no prejudice in mind.
     
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    Thanks so much @stayblessed. Love is simple and so is my vocabulary.
     
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    That's so wonderful. :clap2::clap2::clap2:
     
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    Beautiful Lakshmi! If only ..... True, no two individuals can be the same. That often leads to a lot of misunderstandings, pain, hurt .... If only we learn to accept that fact and taking other people's behaviour or misbehaviour personally, life could be a lot more peaceful. The harmony you describe is one step further.
     
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    Thanks again.
     
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    Thank you Satchi for your lovely reply. Yes we forget to put ourselves in other’s shoes and don’t know their battles. A little understanding could go a long way. Thanks for stopping by
     
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    Beautifully written Lakshmi!! Loved it.
     
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