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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by rgsrinivasan, Dec 19, 2011.

  1. rgsrinivasan

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    You may not help me reach the moon
    Though staying with me night and noon.
    But without you, I may soon swoon,
    For you are my greatest boon.

    You may not lengthen my life a bit,
    By being with me for a longer bit.
    But without you, I am never lit
    And life will turn a useless pit.

    Being together we can accomplish
    What you and I could not so far,
    Each will let the other unleash
    A force hitherto unused so far.

    Your positive answer will lead to
    A great new life and fun together.
    Tell me dear! Who won't like to
    Have fun and learning together?
     
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    Back with a bang....... Nicely done. The poem is really a pleasure to read... Thank you
     
  3. ShailRaghuvansh

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    A sweet piece of verse, something we all feel sometime or the other.

    A good read Srini.
    Shail
     
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    Very nice poem..
     
  5. rgsrinivasan

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    Thanks a lot for your fast and first feedback Lovelyme. -rgs
     
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    Honoured to receive your nice feedback Shail. Thanks a lot. -rgs
     
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    Thanks SPuppala, for your appreciation. -rgs
     
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    As usual what to say Srinivasan for your writings.....
    I can just say fantasitc wordings.......so true at some part of our life we all think of this.
     
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    You know, I had a mocking smile when I wrote this, in particular, the first two paragraphs. But the last two made the first two more meaningful and I really felt happy about it Aruna. Just reminding myself of Aamir Khan asking Preity Zinda's hands, foolishly first [mockingly, I should add] and with all earnestness in the second in one of the thoroughly entertaining film - "Dil Chahta Hai". Thanks for your feedback. -rgs
     
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