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  1. Adharv

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    :cheer::cheer: Super @aarthi28 ma'am :clap2::clap2: Very elegant narration and your choice of words are so apt and simple :thumbup: Every scenes are portrayed very realistically and gives a lively feel :worship2: Is someone there behind the accident:confundio1: Heart wrenching!!
    Lucky to read all the epis orelse aduthu enanu wait panuradhu is a big pain :facepalm:
    Loved chid and suchi's frndship :cheer: Hope they clear the air soon, so that our apple boy to focus on his girl (Chandu) ;) Loved the characterization of Chandu, Nandini, chid, suchi, humanity rocks :banana: Chandu and Vima's care and love toward their beloved ones are depicted very beautifully!! Before I forget our little girl charu and the way you showcased her as village girl really cute :clap2::clap2: waiting to see what happens next!! Enjoyed reading all the epis in one go!! thank you and keep rocking.
     
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    That was a wonderful and lively feedback @Adharv dear. These comments made my day and truly appreciate your patience to respond like this. Late aaga eruntahlum latest commentsku thanks a ton.
     
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    Episode 19:


    Both Suchi and Chidu exchanged their secret looks of understanding they had and left it to God for next actions of their life.

    Days passed by and both were concentrating on their career and they used that as a reason to avoid their marriages. But, Chid vilas nor Suchi did not find someone in their life whom they thought to be their soul mates nor someone who would bring a difference in their lives. Chid vilas was getting more busy than earlier with his surgeries and Suchitra on the other side was also busy with new cases and she stood on behalf of public issues. Though her mother was against that, she couldn’t control her and left it to her wish due to Suchi’s adamancy and stubbornness on her thoughts. Days extended to Months and then to years and it was close to 2.5 years and the lives of everyone changed a lot and it also brought lots of experiences in their lives.

    It was close to 8 AM and Vidhya’s voice was at the peak of anxiety and commotion in her house.

    Vidhya: “Mom, where is my lunch box. Where is the new handbag I took from our shop yesterday?”

    Vasumathi came with a Stainless-steel scoop in her hand from the kitchen with an annoying face.

    Vasumathi: “What happened to you dee? You said, first day lunch would be provided in the office itself as part of introductory session. Why are you behaving like a school going kid?”

    Vidhya said in an apologizing tone:” Sorry Mom, I completely forgot! I am going to job first time na, so was in a hurry and also in a happiness”

    Vasumathi:” It’s ok kanna. Don’t think about past and be confident as usual you used to be. Ok. No one gets job immediately after they complete their degrees. It takes time too. You faced enough and I don’t want my child to suffer further.”

    Vasumathi eyes filled with tears out of her happiness and hugged her daughter and Vidhya reciprocated for the same with her. Vidhya has now put on some weight and was a bit plump than earlier. Her cheek bones were not shown now and do so her very lean personality turned to a slightly plump one for her intake of home food for all these days.

    Vasudevan slowly walked in with a single walking stick and Vidhya looked at him with a happy face.

    Vidhya:” Ahem… So, Appa is also ready for the shop. Good you seem confident with this walking stick now. No need of my presence over there.”


    Vasudevan: “Hmm... But I will miss you very badly dear. You used to accompany me all these days
    to the shop and I also felt personally a good turnover last year in our business.”

    Vidhya with a smiling face:” Come on Appa, Nothing like that. I just changed the ambience; the different counters were modified in an innovating way. Though it was a pre planned, I worked on it seriously as I was jobless at that time.”


    Vasudevan: “Don’t say Jobless dear. That was also your job and your innovative idea of introducing the online sales yielded us more profit and at the same time reach to our shop inquiring about shop when they come to the shopping complex”

    Vidhya:” So, you agreed right. The change was brought by me and the existing name for the shop in the market condition got its reach when we announced it online. So, don’t say that It’s by me alone.”

    Vimal was ready by that time and came with his back bag and took the coffee from the table which was already cold. He still had that and said “Mom, I am leaving. Vidhu, All the best.”, he rushed and gave small hit at Vinaya’s head who came opposite to him.

    Vasumathi:” Dei, these boys are like this. How come one can have a coffee that has become cold.”, she hit her head and took that empty cup and went to kitchen. In a few seconds, She immediately returned back with a plate she got from Pooja room and kept vibhoothi (Sacred Ash) on vidhya’s fore head and wished her good luck for her first day of her job.

    Vinaya too gave a rose and she mimed that she picked it from their garden and wished her good luck for her first day.

    Vidhya bent down her knees to get blessings from her granny and it pained her. She reciprocated with a face showing mild pain and murmured,” ouch…” and kept her hands on her back.

    Both Vinaya and her mother came near her running, “Hey, what happened, Are you fine. Why are you bending down like this. Doctor had advised not to do like this.”

    Vidhya: “Sorry Mom, I completely forget that and try to act usual until I end up doing such things. I will take care.”

    Vidhya’s grandma advised her to sit in the table nearby and told her mom, “Vasumathi, get her some water to drink”, and before she completed, Vinaya gave her a cup of water. Vidhya had that and did show a mild aching face and soon pretended to be fine.

    The accident she went through and post period of the next one year was really a painful one. It was her family who gave all the self-confidence, care and affection by all means of moral and physical support. While her mother Vasumathi feeded her with the best natural food, Vimal and Vasudevan helped her in accompanying her for maximum walking and exercise she did with care. She underwent frequent check ups and the physio she has taken all these days has brought her to this shape now. After a year, due to health issues, Vasudevan (Vidhya’s father) could not concentrate much on his business and due to this accident, Vidhya also could not join anyoffers she accepted. When she called them back, there were not much response and though HR’s understood her position, there were competition with the lateral offers provided by the company. She had to accept that fact and did not give up and concentrated on helping his father’s business and the development of it. She renovated their store, introduced new and attractive features to attract customers and also opened a portal for their store. Since it is their family business which his father was running for a long time, she used that as an innovative idea. She took the very old pics when her grandfather was running the stores and the new attractions he used to advertise and picked them as antecedents in black and white to have a catchy look and feel and about the atmosphere in the shop. The online introduction also brought a very successful one and the turnover was good.

    Though she was feeling happy for her recovery as a rebirth, the pain of Vidharth was still there in her mind. She could not trace him by any means and also he has blocked her number and then changed his number too. She was also unable to contact him nor his friends. She was helpless as she was at home initially for a couple of months and for most of the first year, she needed a lot of rest. The next year too, her attempt to find and know about him was unsuccessful. The only update she got from one of his friend was that he is not in India and has travelled abroad. If so too, it was a big ache in her mind for not letting her know about this and also have not come once to come and see her. She was trying to forget things and wanted to focus on her new job she would be joining.

    Vidhya went near her Scooty, but her health warned not to use until she completely comes out of her back pain issue. So, she made her mind and waved her hand for the Auto that crossed her house and checked in that directing to Tidel park, Taramani.

    She entered the campus and found it so colourful. Though she use to sit in the shop along with her father for almost a year, this experience was somewhat different for Vidhya. The environment was very neatly maintained with good gardening and the internal pathways were well maintained and routed accordingly to avoid internal traffic due to vehicles that visited many companies situated inside the campus. She found smokers zone over one side which also had a few female figures who were releasing round shaped smoke vents in the air. Though it was disgusting to her, she accepted the society and felt sorry for their brought ups in life.

    She enquired for Block 8 and came to the reception. She displayed her joining letter and the receptionist requested to wait for some time. She sat in the reception and a guy came in few minutes and called her name Ms.Vidhya. She stood up and he asked her to follow him. He took her to a Conference hall and she found a lot of persons who were new joinees and she was made to sit along with them. The joiners form were provided, an introduction about the company “Lera Technologies”, New account opening form, their employee IDs, Certificate copies etc… etc were collected. Vidhya was feeling excited inside to have achieved her goal of getting in to a new job for herself that gave her a self confidence and independent feel for herself.

    She took the tokens she was provided for her lunch and joined with her mates Vandana, Vicky, Sujaya and Santhosh. While Vidhya and Santhosh were seniors, Vandana and Vicky were freshers of that year, but for Vidhya it was her first company. They got introduced within themselves and Santhosh has switched over from another company with 3 years experience. Vandana was so modern by her dressing sense, the way she felt herself as forward, and their thoughts showcased their interest to get into some projects to travel soon to abroad and settle over there.
     
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    @aarthi28 Happy to see Vidhya after 2.5 yrs.Every word brings the scene in front.very nice ma
     
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    Wow :worship2: very realistic flow ma'am . @periamma maa agreed, every scenes are narrated as if we are there to witness the moments!! So very lively and viday's come back is very motivating. Where did Mr v run away :confundio1:

    :banana: finally we are out.of hospital :beer-toast1: waiting to read next update. Thank you and keep.rocking. lastly viday's is really lucky to have such h sweet family :hearteyes::hearteyes:
     
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    @Adharv Vidya returned after 2.5 yrs.and you have returned after 2.5 months.what a co-incidence:blush:one more person missing and i think she will come after the return of Mr.V
     
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    I think some one commented about the usage of V named characters and I am myself confused. But am sure, you are all getting jelled with my characters. Thanks for your comments periamma and will come back soon with next update.
     
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    Ningale confuse agalama ji :facepalm: here Mr V referred to Vidharth...avar thane absconded :p
     
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    Friends, work schedule is hectic, posted Feedback.

    Episode 20:

    She took the tokens she was provided for her lunch and joined with her mates Vandana, Vicky, Sujaya and Santhosdxfh. While Vidhya and Santhosh were seniors, Vandana and Vicky were freshers of that year, but for Vidhya it was her first company. They got introduced within themselves and Santhosh has switched over from another company with 3 years experience. Vandana was so modern by her dressing sense, the way she felt herself as forward, and their thoughts showcased their interest to get into some projects to travel soon to abroad and settle over there.


    It was a different experience for Vidhya and meeting new people, their aspirations, their goals. For her, she wanted to get settled in a job soon so that she is independent and also want to focus on her career and also to forget her past. Santhosh was a lively and decent guy. His change of job was to learn more and also to meet his financial commitments, he switched over to this job. Vicky was more of a playboy and Vandana was equivalent to him. They actually met when they joined the same batch, but they moved very close with each other. Though Vidhya was a social girl, she was not this much forward with newly met people. Sujaya was unpredictable at that point of time as she limited her talks very much.


    Vidhya checked her mobile to see 5 missed calls from her mom. Before she tried to call her, she got the next call from her and she picked it.

    Vasumathi : “Hey, how was the first day. All the joining formalities are over? You finished your lunch? Have you taken those calcium pills”


    Vidhya: “Why so hurry mom? I just now finished and will have those pills without fail.? I will explain everything when I am back home .OK? and she hung the call. She remembered her mom and took the pills she had.

    Santhosh was seated next in Vidhya :” Hey are you unwell and joined today. Are you fine. Your Mom is enquiring so much.”, He paused “ Sorry Vidhya? I did not mean to overhear”. While Vandhana was also watching this, she did not care to ask a question.

    Vandha pulled Vicky and pointed to a girl who was standing in a Queue. They` teased that girl and Santhosh and Vidhya did not like that. But still, they did not care much about it. When they tried to pull Sujaya, she was straight forward and told straight to their face in a harsh tone, “Come. Don’t you people have any thing else to look and talk about others.” They both shut their mouth and Vidhya thanked her inside her mind for her action as she did not liked their behaviour.

    Vidhya expained her story and Santhosh understood her delay in joining a job she wished for. Vandana who was listening to that did not care much for that. Her eyes were roaming around the cafeteria and got fixed on another smart guy.

    Though Sujaya was hearing that, she did not poke into that discussion. She finished her lunch and she excused from that joiners’ gang and left the place with her plate.

    Santhosh : “Hmm. Vidhya, Life is unpredictable right. I struggled to get in to my first job itself. I tried lots of references, too many interviews. I will go till last round, they will say that they would call back and finally, if we follow up too, there will not be any response. All depends on luck.”
    Vidhya: “Hmm yes, Santhosh. If you don’t mind, what’s the reason for your switch over.”


    Santhosh: “Nothing special other than switching for a better salary. As usual, everyone has their commitments and I too have my own. I know how my parents struggled and I was helpless when I was jobless in the initial days. My inner conscience uses to kill me for not able to land up into a proper job to support them. Being a Guy, my parents were very much worried until I settled in my first job.”


    Vidhya: “Yes, parents are the best supporters and You have taken a right decision in switching over to a job. You will learn and earn more too. Being a guy, you have your responsibilities and for sure money is the one which will buy you everything.”


    They had many thoughts in common and their wavelengths worked out with their thoughts and intuitions about people. It was a decent chat and they disbursed back to their conference room back to check for their projects and teams they were supposed to get joined to.


    All of them except Sujaya were place into the same team. For Vicky, Vandhana and Vidhya, they needed basic training sessions and also thery were told to attend the induction planned the very next day. They went together to collect their ID Cards and and got their project co-ordinator number to discuss about their next actions.


    The day was different for Vidhya after a long time and she went back home with a contentment in herself to have joined in a job she wanted for. Vasumathi was eagerly waiting for her arrival and once she was eager in knowing her first day experience. Vinaya came running towards her with a paper showing her results.


    Vidhya: ”Hey, Your results are out. I am sure you must have scored well.” And she hugged her.


    Vasumathi came with two coffee cups and was happy seeing both of her daughters together.


    Vasumathi: “Vidhu, Vinaya has scored good marks, somehow she completed her studies, whats next for her. I am confused da”


    Vidhya : “Mom, come on don’t worry, I have already looked out for a college for her. Education is important na. It’s a special college for hearing impaired people.”


    Vasumathi knew the care she takes for Vinaya and Vidhya went to her room to bring some forms already filled after completing her coffee. She was back with the details of the college and form already filled with her details of Vinaya. It just must be submitted with copies of her marksheets and Vinaya hugged her tight reciprocating her love towards her. Due to her disabilities, Vinaya completed her studies a bit late. She will be looking beautiful than Vidhya with shrewd eyes and she will be wearing a frameless spectacle, which will give her a classy look. Until a person speaks to her, they would not be able to judge her with a disability.

    Vimal was also back by then from her college along with this badminton bat with a sweat T Shirt and hugged his mother.

    Vasumathi : “Dei, move away. You Sweat so much. You go to college or for playing badminton”

    Vimal : “Mom, to the extent we play, I will be fresh and I can concentrate well on my studies.”

    Vasumathi : “Hmm… You and your explanation”, her face showed a fake anger.


    Vidhya: “Come on Vimal, go refresh and come, need to discuss something.”


    Vimal raised his voice , “Mom…. Coffee” and sat in the table hitting it and mimed some song.

    Vidhya :” Dei, Go refresh and come na. Don’t irritate her.”


    Vimal : “Akki, wait and see, Aroma of coffee is on the way. Chumma Amma will shout at me, but wait and watch”, he murmured slowly in Vidhya’s ears and Vinaya came near them to understand their talk. Before she could completely understand, they smelled the coffee that came for Vimal.


    Vasumathi: “Come on da, Here, have this coffee, refresh and come soon.”


    Vidhya and Vinaya looked at Vimal with their mouth wide opened and Vimal blinked at both their sisters, raised his shirt collar and slowly said, “Always boys are special for their mothers”


    They chatted for some time and Vidhya shared the College details of Vinaya which she has identified and gave the form to Vimal. Vidhya “Tomorrow, at any cost, you are taking her to the College, put the admission for her.”


    Vimal: “Akka, I have my classes tomorrow”


    Vidhya:” Dei, I know very well. Tomorrow there are no classes for you and the second half subject is also the one which you hate. Anyway, you would bunk it for sure. I have my induction tomorrow and I can’t take leave for the second day of my voice. I have already informed Appa. Appa’s health condition is not really good for him to go along with her now.”


    Vimal eyebrows raised and looked at the application form constantly, “Atlast you girls won. Ok deal.”, he turned to Vinaya and said,” Happee…. Get ready and we will start early if possible.”


    Vidhya:” Come on, no plans Vimal. Tomorrow, you need to take care of all the activities for her, ensure you drop her and pick her. Get all the necessary updates of what she need and bring her home.”


    Vimal:” Ok, Vidhu done.”


    Vinaya was on cloud nine and was happy as she did not ever thought in her dream that she would step in to a college for her disability. She hugged Vidhya and kissed her expressing her height of happiness on the care for her growth and building of her confidence by her sister.


    Vasumathi was also feeling about her children and the care each take care of others.


    Vidhya continued to her office since the next day beside Vasudevan handling his shop on his own, Vimal accompanied Vinaya to her new college and family was settling soon from a chaos days to normal one.





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    thats a good saying ...good episode, now after 2.5 years .. what is Chid, Suchi and Chandrika doing?
     

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