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  1. aarthi28

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    Episode 17:
    Suchi received a message and told chidu, “Looks like Raju anna (Her assistant) is waiting down and I am leaving now. Catch you later.”

    Chid vilas : “Hey, thanks for the blood donation. It was an emergency and this would be really helpful to the family da”

    Suchi : “mention Not Chidu”, she smiled with her trade mark smile. Though it was usual for Chid vilas, any guy will flatter for that gorgeous smiling face.

    After Suchi left, Chid vilas sat on his table exploring his phone. He went to google photos and checked few old pics . It contained the old pictures of Suchi and Chid vilas with their families. Suchi was cute showing her teeth in all pictures. She was showing horns at his back for most the pictures they have taken. Most of her pics were in modern dresses with tight stretchable jeans, short tops showing her slim figure. He kept looking at her beauty and just kept his hand on the photos admiring her beauty. It did not have any lust rather a care and an affection for a child hood friend. Since they have been planned to get married soon, he just started to like her and was making his mind to accept the marriage. They both understood each other well as good friends but of opposite character. Chid Vilas was a quiet, calm and composed guy devoted to his profession. He was soft at his heart and always had a helping tendency towards needy people. Suchi was equally good in terms of helping others, but was of opposite in her character to Vilas. Her presence will be known wherever she is, all time naughty chatter box, takes and decides things on her own. She always wants to be a free bird with no boundaries to herself. She did not like anyone controlling her. She was adamant at times in deciding on what she needed in her life and one such thing was her profession. She respects the person she like , she will at least try to listen to them at times. She always believed in the present which helped her to come out soon of her father’s death that created a trauma for her mother. She always looked forward for new adventures in her life. She too helps people in needy with regard to people who needs assistance for legal help and also helps people for their cases without any fees for them.

    Chid vilas called Suchi and she did not pick the call. He thought to himself that she should have by this time reached court and have put her mobile on silent. Hence, he left her a message to call back and looked at the clock. It was time and he started for his usual rounds to see his patients. He went to the ICU to see Chakravarthy sleeping peacefully. He checked with the Nurses and advised for his movement to normal ward for a day post which he can get discharged. He left to visit the normal ward patients and further packed to leave the hospital. He received a call from Suchi on the noon.

    Suchi : “Hey, you had messaged me to call me,… Anything urgent, we met in the morning only na”

    Chid Vilas: “Nope . Just like that called you. Will you join me for a walk in the morning tomorrow? I will come and pick you from home at 6 da”

    Suchi : “Doctor Sir, you do your regular workouts and walking is usual for you. But at 6 AM, it’s too much… no no… Its is 10 much for me.”

    Chid Vilas : “Hey Suchi, come on, I have never called you earlier. Just felt like spending some time with you ma.. Please…..”

    Suchi : “Aiyoo…. I can’t commit to you, still I will try? Post lunch, I have 3 more cases in the noon .I am sorry chidu. Please don’t force me “, and she hung the call.

    Though it was usual for him and he knew about suchi’s character very well. Chid vilas was not sure as why he wanted to spend time with her. He was making himself ready for marriage as his mother was also nagging him for his marriage with Suchi. He thought to himself as he has spent so many years with Suchi and they know each other well. As a friend, nothing can stop them being sharing their care and affection towards each other. But as a life partner, both of them though they like each other, they were not convinced with in themselves to get married. It was a common thought between them. In fact, they both have the similar thought that Good friends can become life partners, but whether this will work out for between them or not, they were unsure within themselves.

    Chandrika shifted her father to an individual sophisticated deluxe suite room with all facilities and Sivakami was freed by giving a room for herself. Charu looked at the room and said, “Vow, this looks like a house akka.”

    Chandrika : “yes, this is a Suite room and facilities are good here dear”

    Sivakami : “Room should be very costly it seems.”

    Chandrika : “Chitti, It’s all his earnings and he deserves the best treatment to be provided.”

    Sivakami turned her face and was irritated to see her son Chiranjeevi exploring mobile again which peaked her anger. She pulled the mobile from him and yelled at him , “Again and Again this mobile. Don’t you care for your father? Why did I bring you here? Do you exactly know about his health condition or not now. Look at her, being a girl child, how she is taking care of her father?”

    As it was a suite room in the hospital, it had a small visitor room in the front followed by Patient room with all facilities. Chandrika was managing the bed for chakravarthy and she slowly explained him his condition. She held his hands and cupped her palm with chakravarthy palm. She gave him a very positive hope and confirmed him that his condition is a temporary. Chakravarthy could not resist controlling his tears which made Sivakami also broke down. She cursed herself in her mind for being rude with him. Though she hated him for his care shown towards Chandrika and always fought with him, she wanted him to be healthy and want him to be for her family alone.

    But when she saw Chandrika, she cursed herself to have brought his son Chiranjeevi like this. Nandita came to see Chandrika and Chakravarthy along with his father and Mother. Sivakami was introduced to them for which she did not give a good response which Chandrika already expected.

    Nandita’s Father : “Sir, how are you doing now? Poor Chandrika, she suffered a lot, but a brave girl. She was not sure of what to do until she got a clear picture of your health condition.”

    Chakravarthy was proud of his daughter and held her hand as she was sitting next to him in the bed with a smile

    Nandita’s father continued, “Don’t worry, you will be alright soon. Sorry, I could not come earlier due to some important cases.”

    Chakravarthy: “It’s Ok. Actually, I have to thank you to allow Nandita to stay with chandrika during this hardship time for my daughter.”

    N Father: “It’s ok. No need to mention and I am happy for my daughter and for the importance that she gave to her friendship.”

    Nandita :”That’s Ok Uncle. I have time and I can’t just leave my friend in this state and with no people around her. I can’t forgive myself if I could not able to avoid my travel.”

    Chandrika just hugged Nandita and said “Hey, thanks a lot for being with me. It was the biggest moral support for me.”

    Chakravarthy was sitting in an elongated position with his bed stretched upwards trying to give some few movements with a smiley ball for his left hand that show his confidence to become normal soon.

    Nandita father just turned around and told him, “I Have arranged for a new person.” And chakravarthy face changed and he raised his eye brows towards Sivakami. Sivakami noticed it and she was arranging things casually as if she did not notice anything.

    Nandita’s Father understood and continued, “Actually, We are also leaving with Nandita to US in next 10 days and we might take a couple of months to return back. If you need any help, I can arrange for some person for you to help you by all means.”

    Chakravarthy was convinced with his words and said, “Any time, I will call you any help. Thanks again for everything.”

    They spoke few common things and started and Nandita also started with their parents while Doctor came for his usual rounds which was none other than Chid Vilas.

    Chid Vilas : “So, Mr.Chakravarthy, how are you doing now?”

    Chakravarthy: “yes, am good doctor. I am continuing all the exercises and want to come back to normal soon.”

    Chid Vilas : “That’s the spirit and you look confidence too now. Am sure, with this attitude, you will be back to normal soon sir.”

    Chid Vilas looked at Chandrika, “So, it’s good to see him like this”, while chakravarthy intruded and said, “it’s all because of her only”, which did show his affection towards her.

    Chid vilas looked at her and he got a docile feel. He felt a complete difference in her by all means in her outlook, hair style and she was simply beautiful with a homely face. He stared at her for a moment and moved his eyes aside understood the situation.

    Chid Vilas : “Sir, she is a calm girl, but was very smart. Being alone, she actually followed up on all your medical treatment, it’s progress, finances and her care and follow up made you brought to this state. You will be alright soon.”

    Chakravarthy was feeling proud again for his daughter and sighed him thanks while a tear drop fell from his eyes.

    He gave the next set of instructions until he stays in hospital for next one week. Nandita also left along with her parents while Chandrika took a leave along with him to send her off.

    Chandrika : “All your packing is already over right. Do you have anything left for your shopping?”

    Nandita : “Yeah, as I had planned already, Not much pending da. Only, few foodies which I packed had to be re packed. But I have some shopping to be done with Charu. I am picking her tomorrow for a sight seeing and shopping. Ask her to be ready tomorrow in the morning when I come and pick her up.”

    Chandrika : “Come on! When did you plan this?”

    Nandita :” It’s already planned. Poor girl, I will show her the city walk of life.”

    Chandrika : “ Fine, she also got a chance now. “

    Nandita: “Hmm… I also saw a spark in Doctor face when she saw you. You noticed that”, she teased her.

    Chandrika : “Come on Nandu, he is the doctor treating my father and don’t talk rubbish.”, she stopped her with a harsh face.

    Nandita :”Ok, Madam. Sorry”, she mimed by closing her mouth and you saw that girl who came to hospital for blood donation and she also seems to be linked with doctor.”

    Chandrika diverted the topic , “ Hmm.. It’s none of our business da and let’s look at our priorities now.”

    Nandita smiled and waved bye and joined their parents who were waiting in the corridor for her.
     
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    Episode 18:


    Chandrika diverted the topic , “ Hmm.. It’s none of our business da and let’s look at our priorities now.”

    Nandita smiled and waved bye and joined their parents who were waiting in the corridor for her.

    When Chandrika returned back, she saw Vimal on the way back to her room. He looked at her recognizing her and asked her, “Hi Sister, what are you doing here?”

    Chandrika : “Hello, My Father is also admitted here only. Today only , he was shifted to the room”

    Vimal :”Your father is admitted and You donated blood for my sissy”, It was a surprise to him and he continued, “ You are really great. For your good thought and deed, definitely, your father will be normal soon.”

    Chandrika Smiled at him, “Oh thanks a lot and that’s ok. How is your Sister? What’s your Name? I forgot to ask that too? I am sorry?”

    Vimal replied with a smile , “I am Vimal Akka, Hope I can call you Akka.” , for which Chandrika replied with a smile “With Pleasure”

    Vimal: “My sister’s operation is done and she is out of danger now. It’s all because of donors like you. We were worried and by God’s grace we got her blood group on time. She still has lots of wounds in her body. It’s a rebirth for her. What to say, it was her birthday yesterday and she reached the doors of hell and came back.”

    Chandrika felt really sorry for his sister and continued, “Oh…. It’s really sad to hear and also good that she is out of danger. Like this, she will also recover soon. My sincere prayers for her speedy recovery”

    This gave a positive feel for Vimal and he felt comfortable with Chandrika like he was with Vidhya. Chandrika too liked him for the way he cared for his sister and as a brother which she did not get from Chiranjeevi.

    It was 5.30 AM in the morning and Chid vilas woke up automatically without an alarm. He refreshed and switched off the usual alarm which is of not much use to him as he is used to getting early for a walk and jog. He wanted to call Suchi but did not do that as he know that she is a typical sluggard who don’t want to miss out her morning sleep. He started and went to Thiruvanmiyur beach near his residence and one of the beaches in Chennai which was maintained well.

    He did slow jogging from him home and reached the beach and was slowly jogging over the road and reached near the pedestrian before the beach. It was close to 6.30 AM and he sat on the small footwall on the shore from where they have to take a walk on the sand to reach the beach. The Climate was fine that day and the Sun has slightly started to show his face that would be morning bliss to feel that. Lots of his old memories recollected in his mind.

    Both fathers of Suchi and Chid Vilas were very close friends and do so they both since their child hood. They did their schooling together until they changed their professions when they had to decide their career. It was like Suchi being boyish and uses to get all sorts of fussy fights and Chid vilas use to safe guard her. She was straight forward and involves in all fights for truth and justice. She will never give up and end up with fights and Chid vilas has to go and compromise for her. Suchi use to tease Chid vilas for being coward but he was firm that he don’t want to get involved in any fights and public affairs unless until it comes directly to him. Both their parents had that mind set to join hands of these two in future in a thought that opposite poles attract each other for their attitude and character they portrayed and exposed to the society. But both chid vilas and Suchi cherished their friendship and will not give up each other, but being a life partner was not something they had in their mind. They understood each other well and don’t give up each other. It was due to Suchi’s father’s sudden demise, Suchi’s mother was left in to a traumatic position by both physical and mental health. She was firm in her mind that she wanted Suchi to get married to Chid vilas. Chid Vilas parents also wanted the same but did not want to go beyond their son’s wish if he is not interested in this marriage. Chid vilas association with girls was very less and Suchi was her only girlfriend. During his college days, he did not get any crush towards anyone and was serious in to studies. He did received some indirect proposals for which he did not give any importance. He has also shared it with suchi for which she uses to make fun of him.

    He was taken away by the thud he received in his back and it was Suchi in her three fourth jeggings with a sleeveless tight T shirt. She was wearing a band in his head to avoid her front side hair falling down and her pony was waving in the air. She was sweating as she ran and came towards him.

    Chid Vilas : “Hey, you! How come you are here? I thought you would have slept and don’t want to disturb you”

    Suchi : “You Idiot, I am calling you from the end of this platform and you were in to some thoughts. Why did not you call me nor come to my house “

    Chid Vilas: “No Suchi, I thought you would be sleeping and you are fond of morning sleep. I don’t want to disturb you da.”

    Suchi: “You only called me yesterday to join you. Won’t you try to call me or give a wake up Alarm. You did not call me nor come to my house. I woke up to found it was 6.15, rushed and came over here for you.”

    Chid Vilas :”Oh Sorry da. I don’t want to spoil your morning sleep da which you are really fond of.”

    Suchi :” “Then you should not have called me itself, calling me and doing such things”, she was breathing heavily with a dyspathy.

    Chid Vilas :”Hey, I did not mean it. Sorry da. Come on have this energizer”, he gave her a water bottle. She got that from him and had it.

    Suchi :”Hmm.. You are good in all these. You are sweet. Will you put coffee to me and wake me in the morning post our marriage.”, she asked in a teasing tone.

    Chid Vilas : “Hmm… Please be serious Suchi. Will our frequencies match? Please be frank with me. We are moving as very good friends from our childhood. But as a life partner, will it suit between us.”

    Suchi was still playing, “Hey, do you have any thought of any other girl in your mind. Tell me openly, I will talk to your parents and free myself from you.”

    Chid Vilas : “I am serious Suchi. This is not a game and our life. After Marriage, I don’t want ourselves to put in to a situation of embarrassing moments between us. I like you so much and you are my dearest friend. But I have not imagined you as a Life partner a single time in my life time. I care for you, I like you for all your mischievous activities you do and also have the fit of temper to tolerate anything you do. But when it comes to life where we have to share everything, it’s a different feel and I am yet to get such a feel from you.”

    Suchi was looking at his face and burst out in to laugh so that people around looked at them. She understood that but she over reacted and said , “Sorry… Sorry”, with a pause.

    Chid Vilas :” Come on Suchi, Everything is playful for you. You are a notable lawyer and have your own respect in the society. You are nearing 28 years and still playing like a child.”

    Suchi : “Oh.. Ok Ok… sorry da. I can play just with you and I am not like this with anyone else. You know that too.”

    Chid vilas looked at her straight, “Let me come straight to the question. Do you really like me? Haven’t you met any guy whom you felt like your soul mate? Life is not about caring and sharing and it has more to do…It has… “, he struggled to complete.

    Suchi covered it , “It has more… what more? Romance, Touch, feel and x, y, z”, she completed by dragging the words wontedly. “So, Sir is not interested in marrying me, Is that So?”

    Chid Vilas : “ Hey Idiot, why are you killing me like this? You really don’t understand or trying to act with me like this. Though our parents wanted us coquet with one another, I don’t find a new attraction as a life partner with you. Please be serious. I believe we understand each other and want to take some decisions in our life where both of us will be happy. Leave our parents aside and we need to be clear with what want.”

    Suchi :” Ok… Let me be frank Chidu. At the moment, I am totally not interested in marriage nor attracted to any guy yet. For my mom’s state, she wanted me to pull me to someone and you are the scapegoat for her. Your parents like me as they had this thought since our childhood and looking at my mom’s medical condition, they want to help her and at the same time, They feel that I can also be a good Daughter in law to them.”

    Chid Vilas: “Now, you are coming to the point.”

    Suchi :”But they both don’t know that we can be good friends and if at all we get married, it would be a mutual sacrifice we do towards each other and no one will know that we have not ended up with our correct soul mates of our life.”

    Chid Vilas :”Again, you are coming to the point.”, he was feeling a comfort zone with her words as she was bringing the points correctly.

    Suchi : “It will not work out between us. But for the time being, let’s stick on to this and leave it to the mother of nature to show our correct life partners. We will help each other by postponing the marriage ideas to the extent we can. You know Mom’s health na. Please da, you should be able to help me out for sure in this.”

    Chid Vilas held her cheeks, “Hey, Come on, I also care for her health. Thanks a lot da. Now only, you are acting as a correct lawyer justifying things and coming to reality. Hope you did not have any hopes.”

    Suchi :”Hey, you are a chocolate boy and not to my expectations”, she said that in a teasing tone.

    Chid Vilas, “Hey, I am for sure going to see the guy you are going to end up with. Any way, you are not going to hide anything from me. Let me see”


    There was a fat lady she was watching with her tummy squeezing out of her tight T shirt who had come for jogging. she was wearing that tight outfit and was eating something.

    Suchi was very casual , “Hey, Look at that tummy lady, she will never get down in her weight though she do come for such walk and still eat like this. Like this, you will also not get anyone of your choice and going to end up with me finally.”

    Chid Vilas : “Suchi, I will kill you, you will never change”, and stood up to hit her.

    Suchi understood and started to run and he started to chase her. The game ended finally with Chid vilas holding her pony tail.

    Suchi :” Ok, Ok, Surrendered sir, I was just joking and was serious in my words. Who knows, there can be someone else in my destiny with whom I may get attracted.”

    They both hit each other and started home together. Chid vilas left her at her home and Suchi’s mother welcomed her from the room hearing his voice.

    Chid Vilas :”Aunty, how are you doing?”

    Suchi’s mother saradha, “Chidu, How are you doing? Its long time since I met anandhi (Chid Vilas Mother) too. Ask her to come and meet me some time as I can’t?”

    Chid Vilas :” Sure, Aunty, I will ask amma to come and meet you.”

    Both Suchi and Chidu exchanged their secret looks of understanding they had and left it to God for next actions of their life.
     
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    @aarthi28 Your narration in simple words bring out the scenes in front of our eyes.Enjoyed reading
     
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    Suchi's and Chid's relationship is confusing .. going good Aarthi!
     
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    Yeah PD it will be a sort of. You will understand it in coming episodes.
     
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    Thanks @aarthi28
     
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    Come on Dr.Chid. Not Suchi it’s Chandrika who is born for you. No confusion
    Lovely narration Aarthi. Feels like watching a movie
     
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    Dr.Chid needs people like you Rathi , lovely!
     
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    Madam where did Rathi come in to picture....
     
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    oops I meant Rith...lol...Thanks @aarthi28
     

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