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Www- Wondrous Women World

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by aarthi28, Feb 25, 2019.

  1. Adharv

    Adharv Gold IL'ite

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    :hearteyes: cool update ma'am :clap2:
    why is he puzzled :thinking: I liked vidaya and vidhu's matured convo and their future plans....waiting to see what happens next.

    I thought I will have many epis to read :nut:
    Thank you and keep rocking.
     
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    I missed this note ma'am . Hope your kids are doing good. Take care.
     
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    Sorry All, work was a bit hectic. Next Episode Posted.

    Episode 10:

    After the waiter left, Vidharth came near her and cupped her cheeks with both his hands and looked deep in to his eyes. Vidharth slowly came near her face and Vidhya could not control him nor resist against him for his action and they looked at each other. Vidharth brought his lips near hers and suddenly they heard a big sound nearby from the place they were seated and realized their state and moved aside. Vidhya blushed for her action and Vidharth caressed his hair with his hands.

    Vidharth asked Vidhya to close her eyes and she said, “hey what again? “

    Vidharth :” Hmm… Surprise, and will you please close your eyes!”

    Vidhya closed her face with her hands and tried to peek in through the gap and Vidharth went aside, “hey don’t open until I say, Ok….” And she abided to his order.

    Vidharth: “Now open your eyes”, and Vidhya opened and to her surprise, she saw a box and she opened to see a beautiful designer saree in it.

    Vidhya: “Hey you are giving me more surprises now days.” And she was stunned looking at that Saree and the work in it. She loved the design but felt bad that she don’t know to wear Saree at all. She faked a shrink face, “I don’t know to wear Saree and have never worn one too. It was during my pub…,” she bit her tongue .

    Vidharth understood it” Hmm..when was it you wore saree last time madam…?”

    Vidhya blushed and closed her face with the saree box. Vidharth clutched her shoulders with his hands, “hmm.. You will wore it soon in an occasion between our families… Ok. The days are not so far dear…”

    Vidhya was in height of happiness hearing a positive note from him and at the same time she was matured enough to accept and understand what she need for herself, what is needed from her to for her family, her responsibilities that she wanted to fulfill as an elder daughter and to be a good elder sister for her siblings. She was able to feel her responsibility as a matured woman and thought to her inner mind about the changes she felt in the recent days since her completion of her Graduation.

    It was almost 3 PM and Vidharth received a call from his Mother. He attended it, "Ah, yes Mom."

    V Mom: " Vidharth where are you. Your number is not reachable for long time."

    Vidharth :"Mom, came to meet my friend. What's up? I finished all the works we discussed", his voice gave a small respectful fear towards his Mother.

    V Mom: " Looks like you are hiding something from me. It's not about completing works since you are in to our business. You are no more a college going student for me to leave you just like that. I want you to grew more heights, your concentration should be on building our business with more innovative ideas, People should say your name as the Young entrepreneur I have lots of hopes on you and..." and

    Vidharth :" Mom.... Fine. fine.I will definitely keep up your name. Lets discuss this when I come back. I just came to see my friend and please..", he begged her pardon.

    V Mom: "Hmm... ", there was a pause..." Ok.. Now on please no friends, I wish you..."

    Vidharth :" Ok Mom. I am starting now. We will talk later" and she hung the call.

    Vidhya :" Hey what happened? What did she say?"

    Vidharth :" Vidhu, she always wants me to look at business for 24 hours. We have earned a lot and she is still not satisfied. It's good that I have to grow, but it's not that important that we should sacrifice our happiness and keep on working for our goals when there is actually no need of it with what we have got now."

    Vidhya understood his thoughts, but " It's Ok. She wants to see your growth."

    Vidharth :"hmm.. It' time and lets leave for the day. I need to see when I can meet you again by giving some reasons to my mom. She is doing too much follow up with me."

    Vidhya felt a bit heavy on his thoughts as how his mother would treat their relationship while Vidharth's father is like a puppet in his Mother's hands. His brother was out of her control and she wanted to keep Vidharth too much within her control.

    The love birds left with heavy heart and when they left, two guys crossed them in their bike and Vidhya sensed a familiar face. Vidharth was continuously getting calls from his mother and Vidhya understood and said, "It's Ok Vidharth, I will take an Auto or Cab."

    Vidharth felt a sorry face and started in his car. Vidhya started looking for an Auto in her Mobile App. There were no Cabs nor any Autos that she could find and felt annoyed and cursed the App in her mind. She walked to the main road to look for buses with her thoughts filled with his thoughts.

    Again Chandrika was unable to meet the busy cardiac surgeon due to some emergency case he got to attend and she was given an appointment to meet him in the evening. Till then, the instructions were provided for his father’s treatment.

    Nandita mentioned about looking for some other Doctor and checked with her father for which Chandrika was not really interested and she trusted Dr.Vilas.

    By then Chandrika refreshed in the room provided and had the food Nandita got for her. For the last two days drift she faced and the events happened in her life, those two days lessons gave her more maturity than before. She felt bit more confident than before and her mind gave her the strength to face the obstacles that came on her way. It was the next attack she was expecting which was none other than her step mom and as she already expected, she was ready to face them.

    She went to ICU whenever she found time to see the calm face of his father sleeping for the dosage of medicines that were provided to him. It was close to 4 PM when she asked permission from the Nurse and she could find movements he were trying to be lying in the bed for long time since he was admitted. His Mind has become refreshed a bit now and was trying to become normal and his face brightened seeing Chandrika's face which was looking bright with a ray of positivity in her smile she showed towards him

    Chandrika came near him and her father lifted his right hand and kept his hands on her cheeks. It was seen glowing in pink after she refreshed and was looking like a Rose. He tried to lift his left hand but he was unable to do so.

    Chandrika held his hands :”No Appa, they have put venflam right and medicines are going. Please don’t lift that hand”, she somehow managed but he was not convinced.

    Chandrika :” You will be alright soon. Please don’t strain yourselves. You will be alright soon.”

    He always saw Chandra (Chandrika’s Mother) in Chandrika and she was looking like a Xerox copy of her mother. Sivakami’s behaviour towards her and thoughts and discussions of property, money, jewels made him to completely ignore her and he saw Chandra in the form of Chandrika and his mind occupied her thoughts very much.

    Chakravarthy: “I wish you get married soon so that I can close my eyes with contentment”

    Chandrika :” Dad, come on, please don’t say anything like that. I am not your single daughter. What about Chiru and charu? We all will live together happily and you will also be home soon.”

    Chakravarthy : “ You resemble your mom in your thoughts and face too. I feel Chandra to be by my side when you are with me.”

    Chandrika held his hand which he kept on her cheeks: “Come on Appa. I did not even go for any work too and wanted to stay with you all as a family which I very badly missed. I am there for you and will take care of my sis and bro also very well.”

    Tears drops out poured when he his eyes blinked in happiness for the way he brought up his daughter while her step mom was thinking about her in a different way and was at the back of money, property, jewels. He felt happy that he has brought his daughter well by all means.

    By then there was a quarrel near the ICU door and a lady was arguing with the security to come inside. A guy who accompanied her was calming her down and was requesting for an entry.

    Security: “Thambi ( Brother), we can’t let anyone in just like that and it needs an entry pass. This is a restricted area and please requests your mother to be calm. There should be some attender who should have a pass and you can get theirs and go inside.”

    Chiranjeevi Alias Chiru : “Mom, do you have Chandrika number, Call her “

    Chandrika received the call from her step mom and also recognized the voice she over heard from inside. She told her father :”Appa, looks like chithi has come. I will speak to her and send her inside. Poor lady, she would have got panicked when I asked to come here.”

    Chakravarthy :” Why the hell, you asked her to come? She will further increase my BP”

    Nandita was there at the time near the ICU door and she understood as she has seen few family pics of them. She told the security that there are not much patients inside the ICU and requested to send them inside. He agreed to send only one and Sivakami was sent inside mentioning the direction.

    When she went inside near his bed, chandu was starting to receive her.

    Chandrika : “Chitthi, you are here. I heard your voice and came to receive you.”

    Sivakami was fuming and irrespective of the place and being an ICU too, she did not had that manners and started cursing her.

    Sivakami :” Hmm.. Madam you are here. All your ill fate had lead my husband to this state. Now what the hell you are doing here?”

    Chandrika felt so embarrassed by her words and the place when the Nurses were looking at her. One Nurse who was thoughtful about the situation and the need for ICU discipline warned her: “Hello Madam, this is not your house”, She dominated in her voice and continued further:” This is Hospital and rather ICU and there are other patients too available here.”

    Sivakami immediately became shut by her commanding voice and her physique abided her to her words. She murmured further: “Look , your father is in bed, you are looking so fresh and glowing like a princess as if nothing has happened.”

    She turned towards chakravarthy: “What is this state?” and started to lament towards him. He moved his face aside not willing to look at her face at all.

    Chandrika has made her mind and told her :” Chitti, this is ICU. Please see Appa and don’t talk much to him. Not more than one visitor is allowed to visit the patient at this time as this is not usual visitor’s time.”

    Sivakami turned her face and Chandrika took it in a light way and told her father, “Appa, I will meet the doctor and update you. No worries”
     
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  4. aarthi28

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    Tx Adharv.they are good now.
     
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    I too feel the same :confundio1: I like the way you are driving the series ma'am :thumbup::clap2: these girls are portrayed very maturely :clap2: I'm sure you u will not harm uncle (dev-ku unga support parthene (saw)) waiting to read next update. Thank you for the update in your tight sch too. Keep rocking.

    Who is that bike guy?? Jr V?
     
  6. Thyagarajan

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    :hello: @aarthi28
    A difficult situation multiple characters and love issues set in olden ethos coupled with next gen aspirations love and duet delectable though but there is more genuine sorrow set around hospitals and relatable emotions and step motherly acts. Chandrika - vidharth are the main a possible clash between lower middle or upper middle class vs multi millionaire son maturing for mega business and the suspence is whether chakravarthi would be alive to run the future episodes to ensure sivgami not clash with his daughter's intersts.
    Good going but anything to turn out good must entail imagination and hardwork.
    Best wishes.
    Regards.
    God proposes man disposes ie wedlock convenience ie destiny for woman and man. it
     
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    Vidhya is definitely gonna have a tough time .. :flushed: poor girl!
    Chandrika should be head straight from now on...

    Good going @aarthi28
     
  8. GeetaKashyap

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    @aarthi28,

    The way you have focussed your story around the ICU, I wonder whether you are from the medical profession or seen someone close in the hospital. Good going.
     
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    Yes Geetu I have more experiences. Moreover, I always try to portray things happenings around me.
     
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    Hey PD lets see how the journey of these girls change in their life and how they face it.
     

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