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  1. aarthi28

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    Episode 1

    Hi All

    I have come with my next story and please provide your support as usual.

    Episode 1

    It was a Saturday noon but the Climate was so dull and do so the minds of all the students gathered for their Farewell and graduation day. Decorations filled the place, colour balloons hanging over the places were waiting for those moments to flew away from the strings they were tied with like the minds of few people who wanted to step in to the next interesting part of their life, career.Banners with friendship and farewell slogans were stick all over the places reminding of the beautiful days they had spent in that college. It was a mix of Student gangs and assemblages everywhere discussing about their parting. There were laughters heard in many places teasing each other and few sorry faces shown with tears droplets at the corner of their eyes awaiting to stream outside.

    The Interesting part was that few guys were still in that anxiety unable to express their suppressed loves from their coward mindset. For them, Love was still the dream of their life and their timid mind did not allow them to come out of the box and the roses they had still stay as paper roses buried in their mind. Some of the lively love birds discussed about their future plans. Lots of parents were also gathered over there to see their wards graduation received in the stage and it was a proudest moment for them.

    Chandrika was wandering here and there in the corridor waiting seriously for someone. Her close friend Nandita was accompanying her.

    Nandita : "Chandu , Why are you so tensed? Your boyfriend will come for sure? He has promised you right?"

    Chandrika : " Hmm... He always comes on time to meet me. But why today he is doing like this ?"

    Nandita :" Who knows ? Did you call him ?"


    Chandrika : " Yes I Did? But he did not pick his phone ?"


    By then, Nandita's parents were there and they came near them. Nandita waved them a Hi when they came near by.


    Nandita : " Hi Mom, Dad? You are on time ?"

    This irritated Chandrika and Nandita's parents enquired about wellness of Chandrika.

    Nandita's Mom : "Chandrika, Why did not you opt for MS dear. I know you are brighter than Nandu , but see now she has got her seat in Texas and she got the subject she wished for. But you were so stubborn in not going to US"

    Nandita : "Mom, Madam don't want to go anywhere after her graduation and want to spend time with her boyfriend before her marriage"

    Chandrika : "Hey crank, stop it, what will aunty think about me ? Aunty she is blabbering and don't believe that ? Actually I wanted to ...!", she stopped and her face turned bright.

    Nandita : " Mom, her boyfriend has come see " and she waved her hands towards the Contessa that got parked and Chandrika rushed and went towards the car.

    Nandita Mom : " Oh... her father has come "

    Nandita: "Yes Mom, her father is her boyfriend. See the love scenes now “and held her hand on her mom's shoulder.

    Nandita Mom : "Come on.. you tease her a lot. She is a motherless child and her father is her world. You should not do this to her dear"

    Chandrika ran towards the car and started breathing heavily. An old person in late fifties got down from the car and Chandrika hugged him “ Chucku…. I thought you will disappoint me. The Function is about to start and if you have not turned by this time, I would have definitely become upset”

    Chucku so called by Chandrika was her Father Mr. Chakravarthi was wearing pure White Dhothi with a zari work and white shirt. He had a thick Moustache and had vibhoothi kept as bars in his forehead. He was wearing a udraksh tied in a knot in his neck and a white towel on his shoulder. His Rustic look gave a perception that he is definitely from a village background. At the same time, his outlook gave a respect towards him that any people who see him will convey their respects to him.

    Chakravarthy was showing a smiling face to her daughter and they hugged each other.

    Chucku : “Got some issues when I Started and hence could not inform you dear. How can I miss your Graduation day.The happiest moment I was longing for you complete your graduation. I will feel complete when you transform in to a complete working women taking care of self, Independent by all means, and also proud of self.” He indeed had a reason behind this. They both never knew that things are going to change upside down in their peaceful Father daughter relation.

    Chandrika : “ Come on Dad! What was that? Anything Serious?” She asked with a concern.

    Though it was an important issue, he changed the topic.

    Chucku : “No worries dear. Lets carry on “ and approached towards Nandita’s parents whom he has got already introduced to earlier by his daughter.

    Both father’s wished each other and reciprocated their smiles. They had their own topics for discussions. Chakravarthy was a landlord and Nandita’s father was a lawyer.

    Chandrika and Nandita were from Communication department and the Graduation day is for the whole college. The whole college was filled with colours and the same phase was being perceived by students from other departments too.

    Vidhya was from Computer Science and she was eager waiting for Vidharth at the end of the Corridor. Her eyes waited for him for quite some time and he was his senior who has come to meet her on their graduation day.

    Vidhya’s eyes sparkled with love and turned much more brighter when she saw Vidharth from the Parking lot approaching towards her after parking his Car. Vidharth was from a very rich background and they were in love for the past one year when he was in his final year. Vidharth proposed her in his final year and Vidhya was in her third year. Being a very big campus, they had met in different places inside the Campus, in the lawn, canteen and were teased by their friends during their frequent encounters. Their eyes met a lots of times and finally ended up in Vidharth proposing her on last Valentine’s day and she reciprocated her acceptance.

    Vidharth held her hands together and said congratulations dear.

    Vidhya’s eyes sparkled in love :” Vidhu, Have you spoken about about me to your parents ?”

    Vidharth : “ Hey. It’s too early. You first settle in your career. You are selected in campus right. Why are you in hurry for Marriage “?”4

    Vidhya : “No, Vidhu. It’s our future na. I need to ensure that your parents are aware of our commitment”

    Vidharth : “ Hey. It’s too early now. Have your parents not come for your Graduation!”

    Vidhya : “Hmm… They are already there. I just skipped them for a while with a reason and came to meet you. You will come to the auditorium na.”

    Vidharth : “No da. I just came to wish you. I have got an important meeting and my father would be waiting for me. I need to go and tell him some reason for coming late”

    Vidhya’s face lost its gloom when he said he would be leaving so early. He consoled her by tightly held her hand and in a second he kissed on her cheeks and said “ Sorry dear. I need to leave”

    Vidhya started to blush and she did not expect that and felt butterflies in her stomach. He gave her a gift and waved her Bye and started.

    Vidhya looked at the path vidharth left with a heavy heart and turned to see a Guy standing at her back.

    He had Rose in his hand and she never knew that he has come for her.

    He said “ Hi Vidhya , I am Vishwa from Mechanical Dept, Third Year”

    She reciprocated with a Hi and she wanted to move from that place with a heavy heart of Vidharth not going to be there to see her Graduation. She wanted to move from that place.

    Viswa stopped her and said : “Hi, I am Viswa and I Love you”


    To be continued…….
     
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    Hello Aarthi, Happy to see your new story. A super duper start.:clap2:
     
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    OMG..Title is catchy Aarthi! Ah...College Life... :grinning:
    Nice Start Aarthi. As always I loved your narration!

    Waiting for the future episodes!
     
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    Lovely and very interesting start @aarthi28 ma'am :cheer: :clap2:
    This epi reminds my convocation day too and the missing moments :eek:
    Ouch starting-laye terror captions huh :treadmill:

    :smash2: junior proposing senior :lol::lol: Superrrrrrrrr:rolleye: Look forward to read next update. THank you and keep rocking.

    Ahnga I liked the title WWW:thumbup:
     
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    Tx Adharv. Let's see the journey of these girls. Few more plots coming in soon. Catch u in few days with the next episode. Tx for ur lively feedback.
     
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    Episode 2 :

    Vidhya looked at the path vidharth left with a heavy heart and turned to see a Guy standing at her back.

    He has a Rose in her hand and she never knew that he has come for her.

    He said “ Hi Vidhya , I am Vishwa from Mechanical Dept, Third Year”

    She reciprocated with a Hi and she wanted to move from that place with a heavy heart of Vidharth not going to be for her Graduation day.

    Viswa stopped her and said : “Hi, I am Viswa and I Love you”
    Vidhya : "Hello, Excuse me", she asked him surprised
    Viswa : " Yes, I mean it "
    Vidhya did not expect such a scene from a Junior Guy proposing her on that day.
    Vidhya : "Are you Nuts?
    Viswa : " Absolutely Not? I mean it ", He was firm in his words.
    Vidhya don't know what to say , but wanted to leave that place and started to walk. Viswa walked along with her.
    Viswa : "Please Vidhya, I mean it. Why can't you think about it ? Lets discuss and come to a conclusion."

    Vidhya went to peak of anger , " Are you mad ? You know ..... ", she paused , bite her teeth and continued , "I am committed . My boyfriend just now left wishing me for my graduation."

    Viswa : "I know that. But why can't you give me a chance?"

    Vidhya really got irritated, " Come on... ", she again paused .. " What is your name that you told now... Some vicky.... right! Vicky ?!" and Viswa stopped her.

    Viswa : " Correction, am Viswa, third Year Mechanical Engg !" and adjusted his collar and caressed his hair with his hand.

    Vidhya : " Ok... Viswa ", She stopped him with both her hands toward him , " See, Viswa, this is not the time to play and huh...You say you are from third year? You should be younger than me , that itself is an issue and more over I am already committed. Please understand and leave me way. Don't play with me. I have lots of work and my family...", she stopped and thought why should she talk this much to him and started to walk.

    Viswa did not let her go , " Vidhya, I know about you, your family, your affair with Vidharth, But still....", he paused and said "I Love you"

    Vidhya : “When I Say I am committed, Why can’t you just leave me…Oh God…. “ She don’t know what to talk further.

    Viswa : “ Ok.. Ok… Don’t get tensed. It’s graduation day for you and I wish you good luck. I know you were selected in Campus and has got 3 offers. Which one are you going to select? “

    Vidhya don’t want to continue talking with him and started to walk.

    Viswa again stopped her and held his hands in front of her. He continued, “Vidhya… Please tell me some answer and go”

    Vidhya : “ Hey what are you talking? You are actually irritating me. I don’t know who you are, I know nothing about you. I said I am committed and you say you know about it. Still why are you doing this with me ? Please leave me way Vi…”

    Viswa : “Viswa…” and Vidhya said ,”Ah yes Viswa. This is not the time to play with me and it’s my life. On top of it, you say you know about Vidharth. Please leave me way”

    Viswa: “Vow… I was longing to hear the name from your mouth. It’s a long time wish for me”

    Viswa continued : “ Don’t worry Vidhya. I don’t know as whether I could see you after college and thought to pour out my mind. I don’t know I fell for you in the first year itself. When I came to know that you are from second year, I checked the records and agree I am younger than you. Come on.. there are lots of ladies who marry men younger than them. Why can’t we be like that. We can convince our parents. I promise, I can definitely take care of you well. I have good academics till last semesters, no arrears and for sure, I will land up in a good job to take care you in a Golden spoon.”

    Vidhya started to walk and Viswa walked beside her , “ Forget that Vidharth, he is a chocolate boy, he will not suit you vidhu. Look, I am taller than you , Am I not looking good than that Vidharth. It's between me and you to think about age.”

    When Viswa spoke about Vidharth, vidhya’s temper increased and he slapped him in his cheeks.

    Vidhya : “Stop all these bull shits and come to this world. I am not the type you are thinking about and this is the last time I am seeing you. Now stop this nonsense and leave me way”

    A Girl was approaching Vidhya and she saw the tensed face of Vidhya and spoke to her in a miming way. Vidhya : “Hey Vinaya, Why did you came alone, Should have come with Vimal na?

    Vinaya had speech disabilities and she was the younger sister for Vidhya and Vimal his younger brother who is about to step in to college soon. Vinaya had a good self confidence irrespective of her problem and she mimed and asked about Viswa and asked who he is .

    Vinaya in a miming way twisted her upper lip and asked whether Viswa is her boy friend as Vidhya shared about vidharth on that day morning and said would introduce him to her.

    Viswa said a “Hi “ to vinaya and shaked hands making vinaya to feel that he is her sister’s boy friend.

    Vidhya : “No, you mistook…., come on lets leave “, pulled her and started to leave .

    Vinaya turned and saw Viswa’s smiling face irrespective of the slap he received and gave a naughty smile. She turned to Vidhya and said that he is looking smart.

    Yes, Viswa was a really smart boy, wheatish complexion and was a catchy face for all girls to site when they look in a crowd.. He was neatly shaved and of more than an average height, well built physique and for sure no one can find an age difference between him and Vidhya.

    With these incidents, Vidhya forget to see the Gift Vidharth gave to her, Vinaya noticed and mimed her to ask what was that. She said that it was provided by Vidharth to her and opened the Gift. IT was a beautiful watch with a Heart shaped Dial with a word “V” imprinted inside the base of the dial.

    She later realised the unexpected kiss she received from Vidharth and was not able to feel that happiest moment too.

    Viswa was looking at the way the sisters left and when Vinaya turned back to see him, he waved a Bye with a smiling face.

    To be continued….
     
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    Viswa whom are u trying to impress :confundio1: Guess vinaya is getting impressed. Why is he not understanding that V loves V :eek: Interesting update ma'am :clap2::clap2: Waiting to see what happens next. THank you and keep rocking.
     
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    Let's see who is going to fall for viswa
     
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    @aarthi28 started reading the story.Good start with college kalatta.Keep going.Four Vs and i am damn sure going to get confused .
     
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    Loved the episodes..waiting to see the path the girls take.
     

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