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Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by sreeram, May 28, 2018.

  1. sreeram

    sreeram IL Hall of Fame

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    Hi ma,

    Thank you so much for always being so supportive and encouraging all of us constantly.

    Glad that you are enjoying the updates and hope to keep you all entertained till the end.
     
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    Hi Vidya,

    Thank you so much for reading and posting your comments. Happy that the story interests you and keep reading to know more about them.

    If time permits do read my other stories too. Share your thoughts as well.
     
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    Hey Aarthi,

    I really wonder how you manage to write your story, reply to all fb's and also read other stories and share your thoughts without fail. Thanks to you for being so encouraging and loving.

    On the story front, thank you ma. Happy that you are liking it. Innum neraya eruku (Lots there to know).
     
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    hi priya...
    nice start... could understand Maya is second wife to Arjun....
    i too like Maya & Arjun name... yeshwant obedient kid..
    waiting to know how story takes it turn.
     
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    Hey Preetii,

    Welcome to the thread, i was waiting for your fb dear. Thank you so much.

    Arjun's second wife :rolleyes:.
     
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    Maya and Arjun both have feelings for other but suppressing...whats cooking...Mmmm...well narrataed Priya..Curious to see whats in the store!
     
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    Priya dear,

    Finally you come back with a bang !:banana::banana:

    I am reading all the parts slowly. My curiosity is increasing.

    Happy to see you after long time. keep posting.:grinning::grinning:
     
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    Hi Friends,

    Here is the next update, sorry for the delay in posting.

    Part: 4

    Anuraga opened the door and welcomed her dad cheerfully.

    "Hi Pa, welcome home". She extended her hand and held his right hand and pulled his trolley inside with another.

    "Hey Anu dear, i didn't expect you here this morning. Pleasant surprise".

    Vishwanathan put his hand over Anu's shoulder and both walked in happily.

    "Hi Mama". "Hi Pa". Aryan and Arjun joined in greeting Vishwanathan.

    "Hi young men, so how is everything going on".

    They all sat on the sofa chatting about things that happened at home in Vishwanathan's absence.

    "Hi Pa, welcome home. How was your trip?"

    Maya came there with a cup and handed it to Vishwanathan.

    "Hi Maya ma, thank you for the nice aromatic tea. The trip was as usual good and tiresome".

    "Anni (Bhabhi), how did you know that Dad came? That was a perfect timing".

    Anuraga was surprised when she saw Maya bringing the tea.

    "Not a big deal". Maya replied with a smile.

    "I heard your cheerful voice, so brought tea".

    "So you mean to say that she is a loud speaker".

    Aryan sounded little angry but had a mischievous smile on his lips and winked at Anuraga.

    "You, you...." Anuraga came near him furiously with both hands clenched and showed him her fist.

    "Did she say like that?"

    "Not though, but she meant that way only. What Maya?"

    Aryan raised his eyebrows in question seeing Maya.

    "Ayyo Anna (Bhaiya), please leave me".

    Others laughed seeing this.

    "Anu i didn't meant in that way da. Don't mistake me". Maya sounded apologetic.

    "Oh no Anni, i know about my sweet Anni. I will never mistake you".

    Saying so, Anuraga held Maya's hand in reassurance.

    "This guy always keeps looking for a chance to pull my legs, he doesn't have any other job".

    She turned to Aryan showing her tongue .

    By the time the topic moved to their business and all three started to discuss seriously while Anuraga and Maya went in search of Vaidehi and Yeshwanth.

    Arjun was following Maya with his eyes though he was involved in the discussion.

    Maya turned to see him before she claimed the stairs and saw him engrossed in conversation.

    "Is there anything else that you want to discuss me?"

    "No Pa nothing more".

    "Good, then i shall refresh and come in a while".

    "That's absolutely fine Pa, you take rest some time".

    "Here she comes, was thinking about you only Aththai. Was wondering how come you haven't come till now to see Mama".

    Aryan was teasing them and at the same time felt happy for his Mama and Aththai.

    "Why do i feel that you are feeling jealous seeing us together?"

    Vishwanathan joined in his act.

    "Not at all Mama, am actually feeling happy and proud seeing you both. I feel that we are blessed to have elders like you both and Amma, Appa in the family. We would like to follow your steps to have a happy and healthy family".

    Aryan was over whelmed and poured out his emotions and all others felt that he is speaking from his heart.

    "Thatha (Grandpa), when did you come? Am so happy to see you back. You won't go again right? I feel very bored without you".

    Yeshwanth came running from terrace and hugged his grandpa happily.

    Vishwanathan lifted Yeshwanth and gave him a tight hug and kiss on his cheek.

    "Hey my little champ, even am so happy to see you. I missed you too and was bored travelling. Will see to that i don't happen to travel any soon".

    Vishwanathan walked to his room carrying Yeshwanth and both were happily chatting forgetting others.

    "Yeshu, let Thatha refresh and eat first, then you can be with him. Now come don't disturb him".

    Maya stopped them but Vishwanathan nodded saying,

    "I am perfectly ok Maya ma. Let him accompany me for sometime".

    "But Pa, you have to take rest right". Maya was hesitant though.

    "He will accompany me in that too. What say my dear?"

    Yeshwanth nodded happily and hugged his grandpa and both went to his room.

    "You don't worry dear, they will manage well. Come let's carry on our work".

    Vaidehi patted Maya's hand affectionately.

    "What about you both? Are you staying for lunch?"

    "No Ma, we are leaving in ten minutes. We have a meeting with client. So not to worry about us".

    Arjun pulled Aryan towards his office room and the women went to the kitchen.

    Contd....
     
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    Thank you so much PS for being there everytime. I always feel very motivated when ever i see your fb.

    Yes dear they do, but let's wait and see what they have to tell us on this.
     

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