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    Next Episode Pri!:icon_pc:
     
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    Hi Friends,

    Hope all are doing good. My sincere apologies for this unexpected long gap and request all your forgiveness for making you all wait this long. Thank you so much to all of you for your love and support. Posting the next update now.
     
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    Part: 14


    Vishwa's mother was very happy and it showed in her face. Her husband couldn't understand her but he refrained from asking her anything.


    "I am starting to office, we will talk in the evening".


    Saying he walked without seeing her.


    She understood that he was upset with her. But she was strong in her decision and believed confidently thay she could convenience him and make him understand.


    She went home and narrated everything to her mother in law. The elderly woman didn't say anything, she patted her daughter in law's hand gently and went to her room.


    Vishwa's mother brushed her thoughts and became busy with her daily household chores.


    In the evening Savithri returned from college and went to refresh. She came to her mom and took her cup of coffee and gulped it quickly.


    She took a box that her mom had kept ready. That's a routine they follow from childhood. She carried the snacks box and went to Vaidehi's house.


    Surprisingly after a while both father and son came in together. They both refreshed and came to have their coffee and discussed about the day's happenings.


    Vishwa's mother called them to have their evening snacks and her face conveyed both the men that she wants to talk.


    His father knew what it was and had his snacks silently. She told Vishwa what happened in the morning in Vaidehi's house and told him about her decision.


    Vishwa was speechless for a while and kept looking his parents.


    "I know you are shocked by my decision. But am sure that i have taken a right decision and it's for you and your sister's well being only".


    "And also i believe that every one will understand it if you give it a thought".


    "Ma, but Savi hasn't completed her studies yet". Vishwa interrupted her.


    "She can continue after marriage also. Anna or Chandru won't say anything".


    The men understood that she is stubborn on her decision and won't back for any reason and both were worried thinking about Savithri.


    Just then Savithri entered humming something and came in cheerfully seeing her brother.


    "Wow, what a surprise Anna you came so early".


    "All work got over today so came early. You had snacks? Where did you go?"


    "Where else Anna to see Vaidehi akka's house only"


    Vishwa didn't know what to say he remained silent after that.


    Savithri saw everyone's face and understood that some serious discussion was going on when she wasn't there.


    "Savi, come and sit here".


    Her mother showed the chair near her father and asked her to sit there.


    Savithri looked at others but couldn't get any hint. She sat next to her father and saw her mother's face.


    Her mother kept looking at Savithri for few seconds before speaking.


    Nobody spoke anything or looked the other, only silence occupied the place.


    "See Savi, we have seen a girl for Vishwa".


    Savithri got excited hearing the news and turned towards her brother to congratulate him happily but stopped seeing his expression. She could read from his face that more has to come.


    Vishwanathan who was looking at his sister's face to see her reaction gestured her to keep quiet sensing her next step.


    Their mother continued and Savithri's attention moved to her.


    "The girl is a perfect match for our Vishwa and we all like her alot".


    She stressed the word like while saying it.


    "But the girl's father is looking alliance for his son too and they want it from the same family".


    Savithri couldn't understand what her mother was saying but she waited for her to complete.


    "So i have told them that we are fine to marry you to their son".


    She looked at Savithri to know her reply but she found only her shocked face.


    She knew that this would be big shock for her daughter but she has to overcome it and face the reality.


    Both the men were feeling sad for the little princess of their family and prayed to god for her.


    Savithri was dumbstruck and didn't know what to reply. She was feeling upset and her thoughts kept surrounding Chandrasekar for a while.


    She brushed off his thoughts and spoke to her mom.


    "Ma, i haven't completed my studies yet".


    Savithri's words were mere whisper but her mother who was watching her keenly understood what she said.


    "That won't be a problem, you can continue after marriage too".


    Savithri nodded her head and turned towards her room.


    "Savi, you didn't tell your opinion?"


    "Whatever you say ma".


    Saying she went to her room. Neither Savithri asked about the alliance nor her mother told her anything.


    As usual she came to the kitchen after refreshing to have her coffee. She looked for the tiffin box and found none.


    "Ma, where is the snacks box. Haven't you made anything?"


    "Everything is in the table, go and have".


    She went and looked for the box and there wasn't any.


    "Ma, the snacks box is not there. Haven't you packed anything for Vaidehi akka?"


    "I have already given them the snacks".


    "Oh, fine. I will go and see her then".


    "Hey Savi, wait. You shouldn't go there from today".


    "Ma, but why?"


    Savithri was confused by her mother's behaviour. She has never stopped her from going to Vaidehi's house till this day.


    "Since we have started the marriage talks it won't be good if you go there here after".


    "Ma.....What does that mean? I shouldn't go to college also?"


    She couldn't believe that her mother has become so strict suddenly.


    "I mean...."


    Before she could complete her words, the door bell diverted their attention.


    "Go and see who is at the door".


    Savithri stared at her mother and went to see who was at the door. By the time she came to the hall her father had already received the guest.


    Hearing everybody's voice her mother came out and was surprised to see him there at that time.

    Contd....
     
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    Thank you so much ma. I am glad that you are liking the updates.

    Am happy that you liked Vishwa's mother. Have posted the next update ma.
     
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    I am super happy knowing that you are following the updates. Thank you so much Ini dear.

    Have posted the next update.
     
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    All is well ma. Sorry for making you all wait this long. Thank you ma.

    Please read the next update and let me know your views.
     
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    :facepalm::facepalm: oh god, sissy...was this pause required here :BangHead: I was open-mouthed reading today's update....super o super :cheer::cheer::cheer: who would be the guest (unakku theriyadhakkum :yikes:) waiting for the happy news :thumbup: thanks for such an cute update. As always it was very lively, capturing every moment n expressions..Savi aunty Weds chandru uncle update padika how many more days should I wait Priya sis :tonguecrazy:
    keep rocking. Trust all is well. Goodnight:hello:
     
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    @sreeram Priya Enjoyed reading. Who is the visitor? Chandra saheb
     
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    @sreeram

    Hi started reading your story today finished 14 epis..
    Very well written..nice family and members.
    Guess good news awaits at the door.

    2 queries.

    1)Many comments say Maya is arjuns second wife..
    2)Yash can be her son and and she married Arjun..for a father for her son and companion for her.

    Mmmm big doubt ma....
     
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