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  1. Oct 25, 2017 #11
    blackbeauty84

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    Thanks Teenulahari. Your comment made my day. Have a beautiful day ahead.
     
    blackbeauty84, Oct 25, 2017
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    BB, interesting twist, as has become usual. : ) My favorite part other than the twist, was the ending. There is something endearing about the act described in the last sentence, given that he need not really do it... is a formality after what happened just before.

    You manage to convey a lot in really short length stories. This one, BTW, is exactly 400 words. : ) Check out some other trivia about it that shows up in this word counter: Word Counter Tool - The Best Way to Get Word Count of Text You'll have to copy/paste the story into it.
     
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  3. Oct 25, 2017 #13
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    Thank you Rihana for generous feedback.

    Wow this tool is cool!started exploring it. Thanks for the link. Have a great day ahead.
     
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  4. Oct 26, 2017 #14
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  5. Oct 29, 2017 #15
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    Very sweet story, BB. Enjoyed reading it. Heartiest congratulations for once again making your way to the nominations!!! :) You seem to be making a habit of it. :clap2:
     
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  6. Oct 30, 2017 #16
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    Many thanks for your feedback mam.
     
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    Loved this one too! Such a pleasure to read such sweet short stories.
     
    HazelPup, Nov 7, 2017
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  8. Nov 10, 2017 #18
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    Thanks Hazel. Happy you liked it.
     
    blackbeauty84, Nov 10, 2017
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    Enjoyed the story.
     
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    Happy that you enjoyed it Sudha
     
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