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    Scorpio707

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    Wonder why you come...
    Wonder why you go....

    Joy for a few days,
    While the pain lingers on in various ways.
    So many questions I have to ask,
    Answers that I get are so very few.
    Do I blame myself or my fate?
    Is this a omen or a curse?
    I now have no energy left in me.
    This can't be the way it all works.
    A start always one day has to end.
    Nothing can last for eternity.
    How does one defy gravity?
    A drop of tear trickles down my eye,
    Alas! not the first time in my life.
    I hope you would leave me alone.

    Wonder why you come...
    Wonder why you go....
     
    Scorpio707, Feb 3, 2018
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    Srama

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    Meenu,

    Hope all izz well. When u said wonder why you come and why you go, all I could think of was sunshine and somewhat of a teaser warm weather.

    Nice poem, deep :)
     
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    Scorpio707

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    Just one of those days Sabitha when I’m off the hook :). And no surprises there if you thought of sunshine :wink:. Glad to hear from you. Thanks
     
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    @Scorpio707 Read the poem and felt the pain .cheer up
     
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    The poem leaves me with a sense of melancholy.
     
    GeetaKashyap, Feb 3, 2018
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    Hugs Meenu
    I can feel your pain. Be positive and don't leave your hope. Everything will be fine soon.
     
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    Hi Meenu
    I was thinking of Snow and it’s aftermath as I read this. Hope all is well with you my dear. Some why’s we don’t know. But all will be well. Take care
     
    jskls, Feb 5, 2018
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    Thank you periamma.
     
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    Thank you. Writing about it takes away half the pain for me :).
     
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    Scorpio707

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    Thank you Laks. Looks like we took turns to vent it out here :smile: . It was just one of those days for me :facepalm:. Hope your doing fine as well. TC
     
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