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Who Else Will ?

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Purple2017, Jun 2, 2017.

  1. Purple2017

    Purple2017 Silver IL'ite

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    If you don't greet me with your jasmine like smile
    when I taste the essence of success
    who else will ?
    If you don't check my turbulent emotions
    when my nerves are agitated
    who else will ?
    If you don't give me a sympathetic look
    when I feel desperate
    who else will ?
    If you don't utter kind words
    when I am in distress
    who else will ?
    If you don't remember me
    when I am not with you
    who else will ?
     
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  2. poi098

    poi098 Bronze IL'ite

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    So nice
     
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  3. Purple2017

    Purple2017 Silver IL'ite

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    Thank you so much for your motivating words......all my poems are designed to improve love and harmony in married life.
     
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    Touching words
     
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  5. Purple2017

    Purple2017 Silver IL'ite

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    The supremacy of 'love' between the opposite sexes is well-established......my poem is just a corollary to that....
     

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