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Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by PoojaShah, Jan 9, 2017.

  1. PoojaShah

    PoojaShah Gold IL'ite

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    'Riiyaa...aa'.....'Riiyaa...aa'

    Somebody was whispering my name. I woke up with a start. I looked around but no one was there. I looked at my husband who was in a deep sleep snoring. Maybe it was just a delusion. I went back to sleep.

    The next morning I got up from the bed bright-eyed and bushy-tailed. I was very excited as we were throwing a party to celebrate my husband's promotion. I was very proud of my husband's achievement.
    *** ***
    The party went great and everyone enjoyed themselves.
    At night we made sweet love and fell asleep.

    'Riiyaa...aa'.....'Riiyaa...aa'

    Someone was whispering my name again. I woke up with a start and looked around but no one was there. I woke my husband up and asked him if he had heard something. He denied and said I must have seen a nightmare.

    'Two days in a row??',wondered I. But my husband soothed me and I went back to sleep. The next morning I wasn't a happy camper.
    *** ***
    'Riiyaa...aa'....'Riiyaa...aa'
    It was the third night in a row when I heard someone whispering my name. It was getting creepy. I couldn't sleep that night.

    'Riiyaa...aa'....'Riiyaa...aa'
    The whispering at night became a norm. I was losing sleep at night. I was not able to concentrate on my work. My situation was getting pathetic.

    My husband would tell me it was just my mind playing trick on me. I wanted to believe him but I knew someone was whispering my name.

    'Riiyaa...aa'.....'Riiyaa...aa'

    I started dreading my name being spoken... I would scream and cry... I would remain awake all night... But the whispering wouldn't stop... I couldn't take it anymore...

    *** ***
    They say I am mentally unstable... They say I can hurt people... They sent me to an asylum.!

    My husband came to say goodbye to me. He said,'Riiyaa...aa....Riiyaa...aa'
     
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    eeeeee.

    Nice
     
  3. GoogleGlass

    GoogleGlass IL Hall of Fame

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    Nice one PS

    a well planned, enacted and result oriented criminal escapes....danger to another girl :(
     
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    Ha ha nice one ! Didn't know being called by ones own name had disadvantages too :)

    From poetry to short stories.. good one Pooja
     
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    Nice one... Is it over....
     
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    Thank you so much.☺
     
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    Thank you.
    Yes..it is over...but I have started a new story 'Suman'. Please read it and give your valuable feedback.
     

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