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  1. Jul 6, 2018 #471
    creativemumma

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    Wonderful story..very professional writing
    Somehow I felt the ending to be abrupt...btw not clear on jai's condition..is it about Kishore?
     
    creativemumma, Jul 6, 2018
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  2. Jul 6, 2018 #472
    blackbeauty84

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    Thank you Creative mumma....
    No Jai's condition is about discussing the incidents on board meeting, he was thinking venkat was not in favor of that because of Kishore.
     
    blackbeauty84, Jul 6, 2018
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  3. Jul 6, 2018 #473
    Rampuri9

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    Wonderfully thought, compiled and written BB ! It was great to read this story. Way to go!!
    My Best wishes to you !
     
    Rampuri9, Jul 6, 2018
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  4. Jul 6, 2018 #474
    ammusatheesh

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    Wonderful end :)
     
    ammusatheesh, Jul 6, 2018
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  5. Jul 6, 2018 #475
    blackbeauty84

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    Many many thanks Rampuri. Special thanks for patiently reading my story.Have a great weekend.
     
    blackbeauty84, Jul 6, 2018
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    blackbeauty84

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    Thanks ammu. Many thanks for following and reading the story all along. Have an awesome weekend ahead
     
    blackbeauty84, Jul 6, 2018
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  7. Jul 6, 2018 #477
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    BB ma'am perfect finish :clap2::clap2::clap2::clap2:

    I loved your meticulous narration.:cheer::cheer: Cool finally everything is on plate and our hero is back to evolution :beer-toast1:

    I would miss vivan :crybaby2::crybaby2:

    Jai's energy and dedication was superb throughout the series. Your lively depiction of love care and understanding between the family members was fantastic :cheer::cheer::number_one:

    Enjoyed reading and happy ending :banana::banana:

    Thank you so much and keep rocking.
     
    Adharv, Jul 6, 2018
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  8. Jul 6, 2018 #478
    blackbeauty84

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    Many many thanks Adharv for the cheers throughout the story. I'm super happy you loved it. Thanks once again , have a great weekend.
     
    blackbeauty84, Jul 6, 2018
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    aarthi28

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    BB dear
    Wonderful story and a good finish covering all parts and nothing left. It was so clean and ofcourse a very professional writing.
    Enjoyed the story and eagerly waiting for the next writing from you.
    Congrats again
     
    aarthi28, Jul 6, 2018
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    Deepika23

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    Nice story and loved your writing style
     
    Deepika23, Jul 6, 2018
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