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"when Love Is Not Madness, Its Not Love" - The True Blessing.

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by IniyaaSri, Jul 17, 2019.

  1. aarthi28

    aarthi28 Platinum IL'ite

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    Hey story I going really good dear. One clarification. What abt thulasi mother and her granny is her mom's mom right.
     
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  2. IniyaaSri

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    Thanks for taking time and typing your feedback Aarthi dear! Thanks once again!
    Yeah she is Tulasi's maternal grandmother and you will know about mom in future episodes dear!
    Thank you so much : )
    Good day : )
     
  3. IniyaaSri

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    Episode 13:


    Tulasi was very quiet after Joyal left. There wasn’t much enthusiasm or that chirpiness she usually has. Grandma understood is something is wrong but didn’t want to force her.

    “Tulasi! Mary aunty has given your favorite snack!” – Grandma initiated the conversation and Tulasi flashed an empty smile.

    “What happened dear? You are very differed today”- Grandma gently asked.

    “Nothing ma… I got punished because of low marks” - Tulasi lied and Grandma understood that.

    “Its okay. Come lets dine” – Grandma said as she walked into the kitchen

    “Am not hungry ma…May be a vadai is enough for me” – Tulasi

    “Hmmmm” – Grandma took a plate and filled it with little rice and gravy for her.

    Tulasi munched the vadai lifelessly and Grandma was having her dinner.

    It was around 9, both grandma and Tulasi sat on the entrance as their daily routine.

    Both kept looking at the sky and the stars and no one spoke for a while.

    “Shall we start our task?” – Grandma

    “Yeah ma. Today good thing was I got good marks in English test and bad thing was I was punished at tuition” – Tulasi uttered as if she had already memorized these words.

    “Hmmmm…. Now its my turn” – Grandma started

    “Today! A big white rose bloomed for which I waiting for a very long time! Those pure white petals from that green stem was very beautiful! Worth the wait I think. That made me very happy.” – Grandma

    “Oh…..Bad thing?” – Tulasi asked without much interest.

    “I have a very painful incident today! Just like you had in your tuition class” – Grandma said and Tulasi didn’t expect that.

    “What happened Grandma?! Not well ?” – Tulasi

    “No dear….Today my sweet heart, my grand daughter lied to me and that’s very painful….This is the very first time…She was not like this all these years. Don’t know what worries her” – Grandma said and Tulasi at once hugged her with tears.

    “Maaaa……Don’t worry na…. I will tell you…” – Tulasi started.



    Today Diya came to tuition class in a special dress. That’s not even her birthday. I asked her the reason but she said she is going to meet some special friend and I have to accompany her.

    I said it will take time and I didn’t inform my grandma. She said she will take just 5 minutes and there won’t be any delays. Since she has to go alone, I accompanied her. When I asked who is that special friend, she said she has got a new friend from her area. A guy. I thought we will just talk on road and move on.

    But the guy came with two other guys and we both weren’t comfortable talking to them. We felt little scary and we didn’t know what to do. We couldn’t run away since we were afraid, they might harm us. And we didn’t like the way they spoke to us as well. We were terrified and that’s when Joyal came searching us. We were relieved finally.


    “Does her parents know all these?” – Grandma

    “No ma…both her parents are working, and she usually doesn't tell them everything ….” – Tulasi said wiping her tears

    “She is all alone in the evenings?”- Grandma

    “There is a maid for her help! But yesterday she lied that she is going to a birthday party” – Tulasi

    “Hmmm!!! Did Diya realize or not?!” – Grandma

    “I think yes…. But she says its boring at home and that’s why she started talking to that guy…..” – Tulasi.

    “If Possible, ask Diya to come to our home in the evenings. Let her parents pick her up from here” – Grandma said and Tulasi nodded her head positively.

    “So this is why my sweet heart was upset?!!” – Grandma asked as she hugged her gently.

    “Maaaaaa” – Tulasi started crying heavily.

    “I had a slight doubt about what am doing is right or wrong….But I went with Diya just to accompany her. When I saw those guys, I regretted badly and I wasn’t comfortable at all. I realized what I am doing was not right and I was worried about your reaction if I tell you. I didn’t want you to panic. So thought of not telling you…. Don't know what would have happened if Joyal has not come there” – Tulasi wept and Grandma patted her gently.

    “Don’t do anything if you are not able to tell that to me dear…... “ – Grandma said and Tulasi nodded her head.

    “You will very well know if you are doing something wrong! Your instinct tells you that…” – Grandma said and Tulasi agreed.

    “Yes maa…. Even today it told me….But still I went” – Tulasi wept.

    “I got scared ma” – Tulasi cried again and Grandma patted her again.

    “Did you tell this to Joyal?” – Grandma asked softly

    “He didn’t ask ma” – Tulasi

    “Better tell him” – Grandma said and Tulasi nodded her head as she wiped her tears.





    Veni was coming out of her Maths Tuition and the guy was already waiting for her.

    “Oh God!!!” – Veni murmured as she came out of the room.

    “Veni please! I sincerely love you!” – the guy started

    “Please! I don’t even know your name” – Veni

    “Am Ashok! I have been following you for the past one year! Am madly in love with you!” – Ashok

    “One year?!!! So, you would have known about my family! My dad?” – Veni replied as she walked.

    “I know all your likes and dislikes, your family, your friends Abi and Aki…. everything! I know everything about you!” - Ashok

    “See! If you keep troubling me like this, I will definitely tell my dad” – Veni said seriously

    “Listen! I very well know your dad! He loves you madly! At times I have followed him as well to know better. He will never deny any of your wishes. So its just in your hands! Please accept me! We will discuss other things later” – Ashok

    “What?! Do you think we are going to get married today or tomorrow?! “ – Veni frowned

    “There are many couples who are in love from school and get married! I want to be like them” – Ashok said strongly

    “What?!!! Get lost! My mind wont work that way….I am totally different from what you think” – Veni said as she unlocked her bi-cycle.

    “I know I know!!! I know your dreams and aspirations! I won’t disturb you in any way! Just that accept me and then we will get married when you wish to” – Ashok took his cycle as well.

    “Oh God! I am not interested in you! So better leave me” – Veni

    “I know you aren’t interested in anyone else as well! Am good! I come from a good family! So please accept me! I wont harm you in anyway” – Ashok pleaded

    “That doesn’t mean I should love you…” – Veni said angrily.

    As they were talking, a car crept in and Veni’s dad came out and stood quietly.
     
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  4. meerutha

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    good going Ini....Suspense upon Suspense...you have the capability of taking two stories at the same time....
     
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  5. IniyaaSri

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    Episode 14:


    “Dad?!!!” - Veni exclaimed as she was surprised seeing him there.

    There wasn’t any reaction from him and Veni was surprised again. Ashok stood as such with a nervous face.

    Saravanan walked slowly towards them and Ashok was trembling with fear.

    “Who are you?!!” – Saravanan asked putting down his anger.

    “Uncle! Am….Am Ashok….Veni’s friend” – Ashok

    “Friend?!!” – Saravanan looked at Veni

    “Is he your classmate?! Or your tuition mate?”- Saravanan asked with a steady face.

    “Dad…. actually…” -Veni was about to explain and Saravanan had no patience.

    “Just say yes or no” – Saravanan

    “No” – Veni said pondering over his strange behavior.

    “Then who the hell are you? Why are you troubling my daughter? Tell me” – Saravanan held Ashok’s collar and in no time, there was a tight slap on Ashok’s cheeks and Veni Stood stunned.

    “Daddy!!!!!!” – Veni exclaimed in shame since everyone were looking at this scene on road.

    “Shut up!” – Saravanan yelled at Veni

    “Dad! Come on! Everyone is looking at us” – Veni pulled her Father’s arm strongly.

    “If I see you again here, you are done! I will file a complaint! Remember! Don’t ever come behind my daughter again” – Saravanan yelled and Veni stood ashamed.

    Veni didn’t like to speak further and she started riding her cycle and Saravanan was shocked seeing her behavior.

    “Veni!!!!” – Saravanan yelled but there wasn’t any reaction from Veni’s side.

    Both father and daughter met at home after few minutes and Veni was sitting angrily on the sofa.

    “What happened dear?!!! Why are you angry on me?!” – Saravanan asked in a pleasing tone.

    “What was that daddy?! I had an image about you all these years and you broke it completely” – Veni frowned with tears.

    “What was my mistake dear?!!! He committed a wrongful act and I punished him. Why are you angry” – Saravanan was clouded by his affection on his daughter.

    “Punished him? Who are you to Punish him?” – Veni asked and Saravanan froze.

    “What are you asking Veni dear?” – Saravanan’s voice trembled.

    “I don’t even know his name! Don’t even know who he is…If something happens to him, we are the responsible people!” – Veni sounded too matured and Saravanan was quiet.

    “Am sorry …. But please don’t be angry on me dear….” – Saravanan said and Veni was quiet.

    There was complete silence and Veni's anger was subsiding.

    “I forgive you……” – Veni said softly

    “But please don’t behave like this dad! Its embarrassing! When you have trust on me, why to hit others …. It doesn’t look civilized….” – Veni said and Saravanan was quiet.

    “Actually dear….I usually know all your friends….But this guy I don’t know him…..” – Saravanan

    “So what….?!!! He is not my friend and why would I tell you?” – Veni

    “What will you do if you got to face any problem” – Saravanan asked with utmost care.

    “If I cant handle, I will be coming to you….Who else I have ….” – Veni asked and Saravanan hugged her instantly and Veni hugged him with tears…

    “Here after better introduce everyone to me…. But now am Sorry dear…” -Saravanan whispered.

    “Its ok. Prepare some good snack for me before everyone returns from temple” – Veni whispered and Saravanan smiled.

    “Me preparing snack?!!! No way! Your mom will come now! Maybe I will buy you some snack” – Saravanan winked

    As they were talking, everyone returned from temple and both didn’t talk about Ashok to anyone else.

    “Everyone!!!! Am going to be the queen in the school drama this year” – Veni said flashing a pride smile.

    “You are the real queen my dear! Not everyone can be chosen for Queen! Your Charm and your smile would have done that for you” – Veni’s grandma said with pride and the whole family agreed to it happily.





    Grandma and Mary had been out for shopping and Tulasi was alone at home. She locked the house and pressed the calling bell in Joyal’s house.

    “Oh you?! Mom not at home” – Joyal said as he opened the door.

    “Its ok! I have something to tell you”- Tulasi said with a slight hesitation.

    “Okay! Come in!” – Tulasi walked in and Joyal Kept the door wide open.

    “Actually…..” – Tulasi stammered.

    “Hmmm actually?“ – Joyal

    “What I wanted to tell you is….” – Tulasi struggled again.

    “What you want to tell me” – Joyal said uninterested

    “The thing is…” – Tulasi hesitated

    “Do you understand?! If you hesitate to tell something to your close ones, its either the thing is wrong or you feel it is wrong” – Joyal said straight away and Tulasi was quiet.

    “I understood. But I didn’t know it would turn wrong. I just went along with Diya” – Tulasi

    “I know that every well! Don’t I know you” – Joyal said and Tulasi looked at him.

    “Fine! Let’s leave this topic! No use in talking further when you have understood it” – Joyal

    “So?! How was your day at school! I heard something funny about you” – Joyal said in order to redirect her to a different subject.

    “There is going to be cultural events at school and there have been many offers for me to act!!” – Tulasi said with a fake pride.

    “Oh yeah! yeah! I know” – Joyal started laughing

    “Heard your friend Diya is going to act as heroine and you are her assistant?” – Joyal laughed heavily this time

    Oops! How did he come to know?

    “Who told you?” – Tulasi was getting angry seeing him laughing

    “And in another Tamil Drama, it seems you are asked to be the narrator?! They didn’t even want you to be on stage is it?!!!” – Joyal teased her again and she was getting furious

    “Yes! If everyone wants to act, who will do the narration?” – Tulasi asked angrily and Joyal tried to stop his laughter by pressing both his palms on his mouth.

    “Stop it idiot! Anyway, I denied that heroine’s assistant role! I didn’t like it” – Tulasi said flipping her braid aside

    “Oh! You are not even fit for that?!!!!” – Joyal laughed again and Tulasi took the TV remote and was about to hit him and Joyal ran away to the entrance.

    Both Grandma and Mary were unlocking the gate and both laughed at the two kids seeing them running around without knowing what the destiny has planned for them.
     
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  6. IniyaaSri

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    Thank you so much dear! : ) : ) : )
    Glad to see your comment! : )
    Have posted today's episode!
    Have a wonderful day ahead : )
     
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    Nice episode... Liked veni's matured reply to her dad.
     
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    today's episode is super fine..... veni is so mature... hope saravanan starts learning from his daughter....tulasi and joyal....onnum puriyalayea .... enna nadaka pogutho (what is going to happen)..... eagerly waiting for more and more episodes .... :grinning::grinning::grinning::grinning::grinning:
     
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    Wow superb going Iniyaa :hearteyes::hearteyes::hearteyes: for all three episodes
     
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    Dear Ini,

    story is moving very nicely. Loved Tulasi very much.:grinning::grinning::hearteyes:
     
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