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"when Love Is Not Madness, Its Not Love" - The True Blessing.

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by IniyaaSri, Jul 17, 2019.

  1. lakshya2018

    lakshya2018 Bronze IL'ite

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    hi Iniya,

    story is going really well. Dont expect this transformation from Diya. Diya's conversation was quite impressive.
    joyal and diya conversation reminding me judging someone without knowing them completely is wrong.

    like everyone said i too want vamsi to be paired with veni. its just my feeling... hope u have better one on the store.
     
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    Mind is not accepting Diya for Joyal...anyway let's wait and watch
     
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  3. IniyaaSri

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    Episode 54:


    Veni was lying on her dad’s lap and he kept patting her gently.

    “Dad! When will grandma accept Rishi?” – Veni

    “Don’t worry my dear! Lets wait…. She loves you!” – Saravanan

    “Hmmm! I feel very bad! Did you feel the same when I didn’t talk to you?” – Veni looked at him and he smiled softly

    “Bad girl your daughter is….” – Veni

    “Leave na dear!” – Saravanan

    As they kept talking, Veni’s mom called him and Veni was sitting all alone in the terrace.

    I was happy that me and dad are back to normal again! And Rishi was the only reason for that! He knows the value of family better than me! But he is not blessed with a family! I did have a beautiful one! But I didn’t realize its value! Strange!

    How nice it would have been if Grandma likes Rishi….!


    She sighed…

    She would have liked if Rishi was of the same caste….

    How am going to convince Grandma….


    Veni kept thinking. As her thoughts drifted randomly, she got reminded of someone who is of her caste. I remember seeing his community certificate in school.

    Strange world…..! It would have been a straight line if people fall in love with the person of same caste! Parents will be happy! We will be happy and all set! But things don’t work that way right… Mad love……..We fall in love with someone for various reasons…at various moments…sometimes for no reasons…And that’s how it goes…. Let me see what happens….Love is madness?! Let it be mad....Thats why its still beautiful...





    That was a Saturday night and Joyal was sitting in the Veranda quietly.

    I was madly in love with Tulasi and Diya was parallelly in love with me. Both are same right?

    Is it so?! – His inner self asked him.

    “Tulasi and Diya are completely different….” – he answered

    “But love is same! The feeling is same! It doesn’t change with skin-color and status….” Joyal felt all of a sudden

    “Why did I hate Diya so much?!” – Joyal kept asking him but he didn’t get a solid response.

    Sometimes its too easy and tempting to judge people quickly without even knowing where they come from or what they are going through.

    Diya is someone who did not receive love from anyone…anytime…. Never thought she has this much in her heart!

    Things would have been simple and easy if Tulasi had said yes! Everything would have gone well and everyone would have been happy and that would have been a perfect ‘happily ever after’. But life is not that simple right….

    Joyal got up and walked….

    The short depression after Tulasi left taught me many things and paved a new way to me! I teach kids and I sleep everyday with much satisfaction! If Tulasi had say yes! Things would have been a cake walk! But …. Maybe I needed that phase in life….

    And this Diya…without even knowing whats in my mind, have been patiently waiting for me all these years?!!! Love is madness?! Just like I did with Tulasi?!!!

    Love is madness…. And that’s what makes it beautiful!


    Joyal kept walking thinking of all these things and Mary aunty was quietly watching her son.



    Tulasi was packing her bag for a week and she was all set for her college tour.

    “Your bag looks too big for 4 days” – Ashwin

    “I pack extra dresses always” – Tulasi

    “What for?” – Ashwin didn’t understand

    “What if it rains and I get drenched?” – Tulasi

    “What?” – Ashwin

    “You won’t understand all that! I always have one or two extra dresses” – Tulasi

    “You girls…...!” – Ashwin

    “You would have known if you have a sister at home or at least if Arjun was a girl” – Tulasi said and both laughed out loud

    “I can’t imagine Arjun as a ….” – Ashwin laughed again

    “Enough! If he gets to know, he will kill us” – Tulasi laughed

    “Ok! Remember what all I said?!” – Tulasi looked at Ashwin

    “Yes madam! Morning 6 I should fill the bowl with grains, after sometime, I should sweep the place, else my anna will go mad! And then! Yes water….Water has to be filled for the birds” – Ashwin

    “Good boy!!! If possible Rangoli at the entrance” – Tulasi winked as she laughed

    “Am sorry! I don’t have that skill set! Will learn from you in the future” – Ashwin

    “Ha Ha Ha!” – Tulasi

    “You know what?! I don’t need to fill water for the birds” – Ashwin

    “Why?! Is it rainy or what?” – Tulasi

    “All these days Anna has been doing na….” – Ashwin said with a tint of smile

    “So?!” – Tulasi

    “He will continue doing the same! No wonder if he fills the grain bowl as well!” – Ashwin

    “Come on! He doesn’t wake up early!” – Tulasi

    “yeah you are right!” – Ashwin

    “You know what! I feel Anna likes you!” – Ashwin said and Tulasi was feeling restless

    “And I know you already like anna” – Ashwin

    “Come on! Be serious! Enough of playing!” – Tulasi

    “Playing? Me?! Am serious” – Ashwin

    “How do you know that?!!” - Tulasi

    “My instinct says!” – Ashwin

    “He doesn’t even talk to me! He doesn’t even look at me! Anyways! No use in talking all these Ashwin! Let’s not talk about this here after! Ok?” – Tulasi was suddenly serious and Ashwin was disappointed.

    "By the way! You said I would have known about girls if I have a sister at home! But now I have you!!!" - Ashwin said and Tulasi didnt expect that at all.

    "So sweet of you! Am your sister?" - Tulasi asked happily.

    "Nope! But sisterly" - Ashwin said firmly and Tulasi listened quietly.



    Tulasi left for the college tour and it was 24 hours since she left.

    “Good morning Ashwin!” – Vamsi said cheerfully as he sat for breakfast

    “morning anna!” – Ashwin smiled

    “Woke up early today?” – Ashwin

    “Yup!” – Vamsi served food for himself

    “Why?!” – Ashwin was curious

    “Why huh?! Just like that! No reasons! I didn’t get sleep” – Vamsi

    “I see” – Ashwin

    “no one is at home?” – Vamsi

    “Mom has gone to temple, dad started early as usual and Arjun ate and went out.” – Ashwin

    “Oh!!!” – Vamsi wanted to ask about Tulasi but he did not know how to ask.

    Ashwin was eagerly looking at his face for further questions.

    “Hmmmmm! Shall I empty this chutney?! Am hungry! Anyone else has to join us for breakfast?” – Vamsi asked indirectly.

    “Who else?! That’s it right?! You can empty! No one else will join us” – Ashwin bit his lips to control his smile.

    “Oh!!! Ok!” – Vamsi was eating helplessly.

    Fine! Let me be open!

    “What about Tulasi?! She didn’t come for breakfast?” – Vamsi finally asked and Ashwin was completely satisfied.

    “Tulasi?! You cant see her for a week” – Ashwin

    “Week?!!!! Why?! What happened to her?” – Vamsi

    “College tour” – Ashwin

    “Oh! But no one told me?” – Vamsi bluttered and Ashwin gave him a teasing look.

    “Ok! Am done with the breakfast! I will go to the terrace” – Vamsi

    “I filled the bowls with grains and water already” – Ashwin

    “You would have! But am going to sweep the place now” – Vamsi said and Ashwin was surprised.

    “Sweep?” – Ashwin

    “Yes” – Vamsi smiled

    Vamsi walked towards the terrace and looked at Tulasi’s room. He got reminded of their conversations though it was very few.

    As days passed, he was becoming restless to be without seeing her face.
     
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  4. mira

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    Iniyaa, I love your writing so much that I keep waiting for each episode to come. I've read all your stories silently and enjoyed. Sorry that i don't comment, but today I couldn't resist. You are an amazing writer:number_one:, making people wait curiously to see what happens next:thinking:. :thumbup:
     
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    Ini dear............what is happening to vamsi.... ??? veni and joyal mind voice super.... i have always felt good for tulsi and joyal.... but paravala intha pairum super duper thaan...(its ok this pair is also super), appidiyea namma aswhin thambi kitta avanga appa kittaum pesa sollidu da.... (say ashwin to talk to his dad too...)... orey caste school la veni thinking abt vamsi...wish they could meet once and solve their disputes and get paired with their soulmates...
     
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  6. IniyaaSri

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    Hi Mira : ) : ) : )

    Thank you so much : ) : ) : ) sweet surprise for me! : )
    Thanks for taking time and writing feedback : )
    And thanks for your kind words! :worship2:
    Have a lovely day ahead : )
     
  7. IniyaaSri

    IniyaaSri IL Hall of Fame

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    Hey dear! : )

    Ha Ha! nice to read your feedback : ) : ) : )
    And yeah Ashwin will do the need full! Lol ; )
    Lets see Whether Krishna Vamsi and Krishna Veni meet or never meet at all!
    Thanks dear! : )
    Have a beautiful day ahead : )
     
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    Thank you so much Lakshya dear!!! : ) : ) : )
    Glad that you found it impressive : )
    And yeah you are right!
    Happy that you are having hope on me! lol! : )
    Thank you so much dear! : ) : ) : )
    Good day : )
     
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    :facepalm:Have posted today's episode Ammu dear : ) : ) : )
     
  10. Madhurima21

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    Iniyaa dear!!!! Good episode as usual. Slowly Vamsi is opening up... Nice...
     
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