Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by IniyaaSri, Jul 17, 2019.
Diya-Joyal, Veni-Rishi, Tulsi-Vamsi .. are these going to be pairs now ??
Hey dear...what a magical writer you are. I started reading the story day before yesterday and since then waiting for some free moments to read the story. Just now finished reading the last episode. You capture each and every emotion in every scene so nicely and keeps the interest live of your readers. Very well done. Now waiting for all new episodes to know about what will happen next. Keep writing...TC.
If I guess about pairs then it will be:
Rishi-Diya can go along after the story ends.
Iniya dear!!!! Somewhere my mind is telling that Rishi have connections with Ashok and it's their plan to trap Veni..
Tulasi was done with coloring the Kolam(Rangoli) at the entrance and Sammu aunty stepped out of the house.
“Very good morning aunty!” – Tulasi flashed a cheerful smile.
“Good morning dear” – Sammu aunty smiled.
“Are you not well?! You look so dull” – Tulasi asked as she washed her hands
“Head ache dear! I slept late yesterday” – Sammu aunty
“Why don’t you take rest for sometime? Let me cook today” – Tulasi
“What?!” – Sammu aunty was surprised.
“Am your student! Don’t you trust me? I can cook well” – Tulasi was excited
“Hmmmmmm! But I can manage dear” – Sammu
“Come on! I will cook today! You rest now” – Tulasi pushed her gently
Time was 6:30 when Tulasi started cooking and she completed it on time. She arranged everything perfectly on the dining table and sat as she waited for the boys to arrive.
“What?!!! Your preparation today? Let me eat in the canteen today” – Ashwin
“She started cooking well Ashwin! You forgot?” – Arjun surprised Tulasi
“Wow! Thanks! Please come and have na” – Tulasi pulled Arjun
“But this is her maiden attempt and I really don’t have confidence” – Ashwin.
“Ok ok! Let me have” – Arjun smiled
“Only if he assures, I will start eating” – Ashwin stood firmly
“Come on man! Its really delicious! She has just copied our mom!!! Come and have” – Arjun said licking his fingers.
“Really?!!!” – Ashwin took his first bite and smiled with surprise.
“Annna! Come soon! Today it’s a special dish! Tasty” – Ashwin called Vamsi and Arjun pulled a chair for him.
Vamsi sat quietly and seeing the dish being served on his plate, he stood up angrily.
“Who prepared this?!” – Vamsi asked angrily
“Its me! What happened?” – Tulasi
“I don’t like this dish! Didn’t she tell you before you prepared?” – Vamsi
“She don’t even know what am preparing today” – Tulasi
“Fine! Am leaving!” – Vamsi
“Sorry! I didn’t know you don’t like this” – Tulasi
“Whatever! I will start now” – Vamsi sounded irritated.
“Have some fruits na! Why do you start on an empty stomach” – Tulasi
“You made me upset by preparing that dish! I am not in a mood to have” – Vamsi said angrily and walked away
“Isn't he weird?!” – Tulasi asked herself
There must be something within him that he is behaving this way.
“You must have asked with mom before preparing the dish Tulasi” – Ashwin
“Yes! But why does he behave like this?!!” – Tulasi
“That’s him” – Arjun smiled and both the boys walked away.
Love is blind! Thats what Tulasi felt seeing the brothers! Though what Vamsi did was not right, his brothers just accepted him as such without even advising or suggesting him. "No one will tell him that this is wrong?" - Tulasi kept thinking. I agree and admire that this is a beautiful family and each one stands for others when in need. But that doesn't mean that they should be blind and deaf when someone does things that are not right.
Love is really blind. At times mad. She thought about her herself. She did not know what made her happy whenever she saw Vamsi's face. There is no chance of marriage. But the moment she sees his face, she was happy for no reason. Mere madness isn't it! She thought of herself. I cant judge this family when am myself mad. How easily I judged the boys....Everyone has their own reasons! Yes! Each and everyone! I can never judge anyone when I myself dont understand my own reasons and emotions.
Veni was happily walking beside Rishi and both were happy walking hand in hand.
“I asked you something! But you didn’t answer” – Rishi started slowly
“Why didn’t your grandma meet me?! But You keep talking about her always!” – Rishi asked and Veni became quiet all of a sudden
“Is she not well? Bed ridden or something like that? – Rishi
“Shall I come and meet her?” – Rishi
“No” – Veni
“Then tell na! What happened to her?” – Rishi
“She doesn’t want me to marry you” – Veni revealed
“Oh!!!” – Rishi felt bad all of a sudden
“Difference in status?!” – Rishi
“No” – Veni moved her head from left to right
“Caste?” – Rishi
Now her head moved up and down.
“Oh!!! I can at least assure her that I will earn money! But caste…..” – Rishi
“Hmmmmm” – Veni
“Shall I try to convince her?” – Rishi
“She wont even talk to you Rishi! Understand” – Veni
Rishi felt very bad and she became quiet.
“Its hard for her to understand Rishi! Don’t know what to do! Let’s wait! She loves me immensely. I have pinned my hope on that love” – Veni
“Is she talking to you?” – Rishi looked at Veni and her eyes were getting moist slowly. Her head moved from left to right.
“She was the one who was with me when I didn’t have anyone! Most of my evenings were in her room happily chatting and giggling! Didn’t expect she will stop talking to me just because I want to marry someone out of the caste” – Veni
“You guys have this thing in your DNA is it?” – Rishi
“Which thing?” – Veni
“To stop talking to your loved ones?!” – Rishi asked and Veni was quiet.
“May be!” – Veni said softly
“Let’s see! She loves me immensely! She was the one who brought me up! I am close to her rather than my mother! That love she has on me will win for sure! I have decided to pin my hope on that” – Veni
“Fine! Let’s enjoy our courtship period till then” – Rishi winked and Veni smiled at him.
That was his usual routine and Vamsi was walking on the terrace calmly. Tulasi was waiting for the perfect timing and she stepped in.
“Am sorry that I didn’t know that you don’t like that dish! Later when I spoke with aunty, she said she never prepares that for you!” – Tulasi
“Hmmmm” – Vamsi
“But why is that you get that angry?!!!” – Tulasi
“I got upset seeing that dish on my plate! Early in the morning, my mood got spoilt and “ – Vamsi
“You know its an accident! It Just happened! I didn’t prepare it purposefully!” – Tulasi
“I dint say you prepared it to make me upset” – Vamsi
“Then why did you walk away on empty stomach?!” – Tulasi asked and Vamsi was quiet
“My grandma never allows me to step out of the house on an empty stomach!” – Tulasi
“But in that mood I don’t want to eat anything else” -Vamsi
“There are millions of people starving for food, and you walk away with your high ego just because you don’t like that particular dish?” – Tulasi
“Shut up” – Vamsi
“You can shut my mouth! But ask yourself! Too much anger, too much ego! Everything is too much with you” – Tulasi said and walked away quietly.
P.S: Planning to post one more episode today.
Thanks for the feedback dear : ) : ) : )
Omg is it...
But Lets see what happens further dear
Joyal didnt accept Diya yet! Neither did Vamsi propose Tulasi!
So lets wait and watch!
Have posted today's episode!
Thank you one again : ) : ) : )
Ha Ha Ha As always lively feedback dear! The moment I see your feedback! I could see the smileys dancing happily! lol Thank you so much first of all!!
Hey thank you so much dear! Somehow completed 50 episodes though I am not posting it everyday!
Thank you so much for you and all lovely ladies here!
Have posted today's episode dear : )
Have a good week ahead : ) : ) : )
Thanks Ammu dear! : ) : ) : )
Seems many like you wants Joyal and Tulasi to be paired with
Lets see what happens dear!
Have posted today's episode! : ) : ) : )
Thank you so much for all the love and support you give me : )
Hey Leena dear!
Happy to read your feedback : ) : ) : )
Joyal and Diya Lets wait and watch dear!
Have posted today's episode dear!
Good day : ) : ) : )
We will know that soon dear
Have posted today's episode! : ) : ) : )
Good day : ) : ) : )
And thank you so much for taking time and writing feedback dear : )